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Array ( [sid] => 117254 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My plesure My pain [time] => 2006-03-28 20:10:21 [hometext] => I ryhm part some i don't, deal with it [bodytext] => My love, my hate
You know them both
You know my secrets

All but one

Dear you
(who will probly never see this)
Who has seen me through good and bad
Around you I'm happy, never sad

You've seen me upset but at you never mad

The ruth of the matter is I love you
I've known it for too long
But I know it just can't be

So though it kills me inside
There is where these feelings must hide
This love to my self I say, its a lie
This pain my hart I just wish it would die

Behind my lie I'm in a shell
With you I'm hevens bliss
But my lie makes me feel like hell

I love you it's true but
With a new blade I say good bey
I'll miss you, I'll love you,
Forever I'll cry

TO ALL GOODBYE [comments] => 6 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 75 [informant] => no_1nos_me [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
My plesure My pain

Contributed by no_1nos_me on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:10:21 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



My love, my hate
You know them both
You know my secrets

All but one

Dear you
(who will probly never see this)
Who has seen me through good and bad
Around you I'm happy, never sad

You've seen me upset but at you never mad

The ruth of the matter is I love you
I've known it for too long
But I know it just can't be

So though it kills me inside
There is where these feelings must hide
This love to my self I say, its a lie
This pain my hart I just wish it would die

Behind my lie I'm in a shell
With you I'm hevens bliss
But my lie makes me feel like hell

I love you it's true but
With a new blade I say good bey
I'll miss you, I'll love you,
Forever I'll cry

TO ALL GOODBYE




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Re: My plesure My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:18:29 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem, I like the style of it and it reads so well. I am sorry that you feel like this, and all I can say is just hold on things will get better. It wil help if you tell this person how you feel, maybe they feel the same. Do keep writing, it helps too. Be well.

*H_S*


Re: My plesure My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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dude i almost cryed

tiff


Re: My plesure My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by EvaLastingRose on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:30:01 PM AEST
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***** thats deep i can relate to this i love the opening too!!! awesome


Re: My plesure My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:32:59 AM AEST
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Don't we all feel that way?


Re: My plesure My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by WhyAmIHere on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 04:12:58 AM AEST
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Good poem, sad, but good


Re: My plesure My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:11:35 PM AEST
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you got your message across well.

Well done.

J.




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