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Harsh straight to the point
Unruly mobs chant slogans of hate
Flags burn on lawns
Children dance to war songs

Here in the jungle there are only beasts
Peaceful trees
Flowers milking bees
Honey pollen floating among the sugar weeds
In thick brush they mate to bread
A seed of trepidation implanted in between

Diamond ring
Mined in the caves which sing
With bats in dark hives clinging with open wings
Waiting with anticipation
And wet teeth
To encounter what the hustling wind brings
Swarmed merchant of luxurious things

A pebble initiates a carved road
Into the depths of creation
Places of heaven
Enchanted kingdoms of ordinary people
Stone upon stone
Towers with walls surrounding were built
At the epicenter a temple once stood
And has now reappeared
As I should

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Share the Wealth

Contributed by Jyssvw on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 08:38:43 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Cruel
Harsh straight to the point
Unruly mobs chant slogans of hate
Flags burn on lawns
Children dance to war songs

Here in the jungle there are only beasts
Peaceful trees
Flowers milking bees
Honey pollen floating among the sugar weeds
In thick brush they mate to bread
A seed of trepidation implanted in between

Diamond ring
Mined in the caves which sing
With bats in dark hives clinging with open wings
Waiting with anticipation
And wet teeth
To encounter what the hustling wind brings
Swarmed merchant of luxurious things

A pebble initiates a carved road
Into the depths of creation
Places of heaven
Enchanted kingdoms of ordinary people
Stone upon stone
Towers with walls surrounding were built
At the epicenter a temple once stood
And has now reappeared
As I should

________
_______________

Copyright © Jyssvw ... [ 2006-03-27 20:38:43]
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Re: Share the Wealth (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 09:02:31 PM AEST
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Very creative, thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Share the Wealth (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:13:37 PM AEST
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very nice write

Tiff

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