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Layers of an archtichoke, slowly peeled
in great pain now, it lay open quite raw.
God the pain blinds my mind as I wake
in the night, the heart shall not be mended.
Beautiful and wonderful was the love of my
dear one.
Oh so full of life, he stole my heart away
My days pass by me in the sad music of life
Ever I shall pray my beloved's soul due peace
And ask God's blessings, and might he know how so
he's missed.
Great aching of my soul, left behind to make
children's dreams come to life. Even in death I
find loyalty and truth upon my heart from my
dear one.
My heart has come away from it's core. Ever,-
shall I gain balance, as the layers die ? Cruel
the grief that eats still away at the raw heart.
Alas, now I know why I shall wake at intervals
of night.

Ness Aug.92'
Copyright © ladyfawn 2001

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Intervals of Night

Contributed by ladyfawn on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

My heart has come away like the
Layers of an archtichoke, slowly peeled
in great pain now, it lay open quite raw.
God the pain blinds my mind as I wake
in the night, the heart shall not be mended.
Beautiful and wonderful was the love of my
dear one.
Oh so full of life, he stole my heart away
My days pass by me in the sad music of life
Ever I shall pray my beloved's soul due peace
And ask God's blessings, and might he know how so
he's missed.
Great aching of my soul, left behind to make
children's dreams come to life. Even in death I
find loyalty and truth upon my heart from my
dear one.
My heart has come away from it's core. Ever,-
shall I gain balance, as the layers die ? Cruel
the grief that eats still away at the raw heart.
Alas, now I know why I shall wake at intervals
of night.

Ness Aug.92'
Copyright © ladyfawn 2001

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2003-01-31 16:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Intervals of Night (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:30:48 PM AEST
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Excellently written!! Love remebered can be very painful....yet if it was real love......no matter what,we always wish them best.You have captured the very rawness of such emotions.BRAVO!!!

Re: Intervals of Night (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 09:35:16 PM AEST
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a courageous write,
well done

blessings on your pain

aern +

Re: Intervals of Night (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 01:07:32 AM AEST
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wellwritten.. " heart has come away from its core " ..ahha.. a cute statement.the poem is very nice. venkat

Re: Intervals of Night (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 01:20:05 AM AEST
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Another great write, I'm a fan, enjoyed it keep it up.

The Phantom

Re: Intervals of Night (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:01:46 PM AEST
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You have great talent. I have read happy and sad poetry of yours....The emotion comes alive in both. definitely moving.

Re: Intervals of Night (User Rating: 1 )
by sunflower on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 06:53:25 AM AEST
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moving and sad, and noble still

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