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Array ( [sid] => 116892 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => [EYES] [time] => 2006-03-23 03:04:23 [hometext] => Today i stare down, an open path, to a set of eyes, which burns with hate, and cools the soul, of whoever may stare [bodytext] => Today i stare down
An open path
To a set of eyes
Which burns with hate
And cools the soul
Of whoever may stare

Trapped in their confussion
They start to unwind
And tell all tells about their tells
Telling the eyes all their lies
For which the eyes will tell

Stare in the distance
The eyes will say
Do not look away
Just stare in distance
And loose all control

Their memories fade like the dusk
As the sun slowly fades away
Night sneaks up and takes control
For the ones who are staring into the moon
So their sins can be washed away by the moonlight

The eyes stare down at the moon
And gets stuck in a trance
Then music starts to play the rhythm of life
And some start to dance under the moonlight
While staring up at the sinful eyes

The music plays throughout the night
And for the people who danced
They were freed from the eyes
And so the freed went home
But the rest found death in the.....

...............eyes of the moonlight..........

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[EYES]

Contributed by diablohate on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 03:04:23 AM in AEST
Topic: obsession



Today i stare down
An open path
To a set of eyes
Which burns with hate
And cools the soul
Of whoever may stare

Trapped in their confussion
They start to unwind
And tell all tells about their tells
Telling the eyes all their lies
For which the eyes will tell

Stare in the distance
The eyes will say
Do not look away
Just stare in distance
And loose all control

Their memories fade like the dusk
As the sun slowly fades away
Night sneaks up and takes control
For the ones who are staring into the moon
So their sins can be washed away by the moonlight

The eyes stare down at the moon
And gets stuck in a trance
Then music starts to play the rhythm of life
And some start to dance under the moonlight
While staring up at the sinful eyes

The music plays throughout the night
And for the people who danced
They were freed from the eyes
And so the freed went home
But the rest found death in the.....

...............eyes of the moonlight..........





Copyright © diablohate ... [ 2006-03-23 03:04:23]
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Re: [EYES] (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:46:15 PM AEST
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I like the different feelings i get as i read this poem. great write!


Re: [EYES] (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:32:15 PM AEST
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i like the style in which this poem is written... it really captured me and kept me reading.

great job!
jenny


Re: [EYES] (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 10:41:27 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your use of language. Good job!




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