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Array ( [sid] => 116856 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Left Me!! [time] => 2006-03-22 15:15:34 [hometext] => this one is about my grandpa, I just wrote it. I am still hurting and today it has been a full year sunce he passed away i miss him a lot! [bodytext] => i miss you!
i need you!
I wish you were here!
but your not!
i cannot do anything about it
you left me!
i need you grandpa!
dont leave me like this!
i cry myself to sleep every night!
come back!
please come back!
at least in a dream
please
i need you to tell me it will be alright
i need to tell you how much i love you
and how much i cannot go on
the last thing i said to you was "bye"
not see ya
but, bye
you looked so sick!
why didnt i know?
you never were like that!
never that sick!
why did you have to leave?
this year I will be seventeen
you didnt even stay til i was 16,
you wont see me gradute
you wont see me get married
or see my children
why?
why did you have to leave?
im completely lost without you now
please grandpa come back!
please!
I need you
i love you!
im sorry
for not telling you how much i cared
how much i love you
and how much you mean to me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 39 [informant] => angel_eyes70 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
You Left Me!!

Contributed by angel_eyes70 on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



i miss you!
i need you!
I wish you were here!
but your not!
i cannot do anything about it
you left me!
i need you grandpa!
dont leave me like this!
i cry myself to sleep every night!
come back!
please come back!
at least in a dream
please
i need you to tell me it will be alright
i need to tell you how much i love you
and how much i cannot go on
the last thing i said to you was "bye"
not see ya
but, bye
you looked so sick!
why didnt i know?
you never were like that!
never that sick!
why did you have to leave?
this year I will be seventeen
you didnt even stay til i was 16,
you wont see me gradute
you wont see me get married
or see my children
why?
why did you have to leave?
im completely lost without you now
please grandpa come back!
please!
I need you
i love you!
im sorry
for not telling you how much i cared
how much i love you
and how much you mean to me




Copyright © angel_eyes70 ... [ 2006-03-22 15:15:34]
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Re: You Left Me!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Lin54 on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:39:55 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful relationship you had with your Grandpa! So many people don't even KNOW their grandparents or consider them at all! Your love for him shines through every word!

Great write--keep it up! Never forget your Grandfather's love!

Linda


Re: You Left Me!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:24:57 AM AEST
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I also lost my grandpa but it has been almost 4 years. It was harder for me b/c i wasn't able to say goodbye, i love you or anything. What helps me is knowing that he is looking down on me from up above and going to his grave site. Wish i could say it gets easier but all i can tell you is that you learn to deal w/the pain. Like you my grandpa will not be in person to see me get married or hold his great grandchildren. Hold onto the memories that you have. Wonderfully written and i can feel your pain for i have been there




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