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But I never dare to say
This question that I've hidden for so long
You and I together we belong

Today I finally found the courage to stand
With a golden ring in my hand
Hoping that you would agree
To share your life with me

Maybe I was a little late
But I believe in our fate
So will you marry me my dear
And in my heart, light a sear

I know that you need to think for few hours
So I will put this ring next to yesterday's flowers
And wait next to your resting place
Sending another prayer to the space
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...Here Lies

Contributed by Opium on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I come and visit you everyday
But I never dare to say
This question that I've hidden for so long
You and I together we belong

Today I finally found the courage to stand
With a golden ring in my hand
Hoping that you would agree
To share your life with me

Maybe I was a little late
But I believe in our fate
So will you marry me my dear
And in my heart, light a sear

I know that you need to think for few hours
So I will put this ring next to yesterday's flowers
And wait next to your resting place
Sending another prayer to the space

Copyright © Opium ... [ 2003-01-30 18:40:00]
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Re: ...Here Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by kegs04 on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:50:00 PM AEST
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aww thats so sad! I really enjoyed it tho, very poetic, and..tragic..
~peace out

Re: ...Here Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 07:09:34 PM AEST
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Ohhh my friend...what a heartbreaker. Very well done! Larry

Re: ...Here Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 08:56:01 PM AEST
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Wow...this was so sad..but so beautifully written....
Jenni

Re: ...Here Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 12:19:31 PM AEST
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OMG How sad this was, and so pinful,I'm sure on day you'll be together again,standing before GOD!
Great sad poem! Christina

Re: ...Here Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:07:37 AM AEST
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i didnt expect this end , duh , this is sad ,but since its not true then :)
save the ring for a living girl lol
GINA

Re: ...Here Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by notaprettygirl on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 12:00:19 AM AEST
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very painfully raw and beautiful. it's as if you've peeked into my heart and wrote of my very own life. excellent write, opium. ;)

Re: ...Here Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by psyonara on Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:39:25 AM AEST
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Very powerful, especially with the ending in that way. Keep writing! :)

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