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your face so soft and tender
your heart so tiny
yet so large and loving
your lips so cute
when you pucker them up like you do
to kiss me
when you go to sleep
your hair so big and full
it flows when in curls
and bounces when straightened
and its adorable in buns
it is the cutest though
when its messy and out of control...
my little girl
heaven sent special angel
you make me laugh
with your tall tale stories
you are so creative and imaginary
I’ll never forget
that day you put on a circus act
just for me
I laid in bed in the early morning
watching you walk the rope
using your toy horse
and how you took a basket
as if it was a ring of fire, pretending to jump through it
oh dear little girl
you are my world
my life and light
you have such innocence in your eyes
they make me warm inside
if you only knew my hard plight
the trials and fears that I carry
oh sweet little aimree
when I look into your eyes so green,
I know, alright, will be everything
you are my joy and peace
an angel sent to me-
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AIMREE

Contributed by Adelle on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:11:13 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

so beautiful so fare
your face so soft and tender
your heart so tiny
yet so large and loving
your lips so cute
when you pucker them up like you do
to kiss me
when you go to sleep
your hair so big and full
it flows when in curls
and bounces when straightened
and its adorable in buns
it is the cutest though
when its messy and out of control...
my little girl
heaven sent special angel
you make me laugh
with your tall tale stories
you are so creative and imaginary
I’ll never forget
that day you put on a circus act
just for me
I laid in bed in the early morning
watching you walk the rope
using your toy horse
and how you took a basket
as if it was a ring of fire, pretending to jump through it
oh dear little girl
you are my world
my life and light
you have such innocence in your eyes
they make me warm inside
if you only knew my hard plight
the trials and fears that I carry
oh sweet little aimree
when I look into your eyes so green,
I know, alright, will be everything
you are my joy and peace
an angel sent to me-
03-14-06

Copyright Â© Adelle ... [ 2006-03-15 00:11:13]
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Re: AIMREE (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:20:32 AM AEST
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Yay sonnets for kids

Re: AIMREE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 06:01:28 AM AEST
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beautifully written, well done

Re: AIMREE (User Rating: 1 )
by bethwood on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:02:59 AM AEST
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you have formed a lovely picture of your daughter in my mind. very well written and descriptive, i enjoyed reading it as i also wrote many for my own boys, how strange when you sit to write them , they form so easily when from the heart! good write.

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