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Array ( [sid] => 116349 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 1500 Jahre [time] => 2006-03-13 15:35:01 [hometext] => i origanally wrote this in German. It flows better in German, but ill right it again in English so you know what it means. [bodytext] => 1500 Jahre
Die heir in der Qual
liegen nicht kann niemand
mich sehen?
Heraus gerauschlos schreiend
sind meine Augen geoffnet
aber ich kann nicht sehen
ich mich zwinge zu
atman.
Die Welt spinnt, aber ich
kann nicht umziehen, die
Turen bin geoffnet, aber
noch kann ich nicht durch
erhalten.
Ich benotige jemand, mich, in die Sonne anzuheben
noch einmal.

Schwarzung kriecht und
Damonen fliegen ganz um
mich, wohen ist meine Engal,
miene Hoffnungen, meine Licht?
Warum verlieBen sie mich?

Ich schreie aus, aber niemand hort, was geschient
mir?
Ich zerreiBe meine Herz
heraus gerade, um zu wissen,
daB Ich bleed.
Colors, keine kann mich,
keinen sehen kann mich
horen zu schreien
verblassen! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Castinova [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => german [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

1500 Jahre

Contributed by Castinova on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 03:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

1500 Jahre
Die heir in der Qual
liegen nicht kann niemand
mich sehen?
Heraus gerauschlos schreiend
sind meine Augen geoffnet
aber ich kann nicht sehen
ich mich zwinge zu
atman.
Die Welt spinnt, aber ich
kann nicht umziehen, die
Turen bin geoffnet, aber
noch kann ich nicht durch
erhalten.
Ich benotige jemand, mich, in die Sonne anzuheben
noch einmal.

Schwarzung kriecht und
Damonen fliegen ganz um
mich, wohen ist meine Engal,
miene Hoffnungen, meine Licht?
Warum verlieBen sie mich?

Ich schreie aus, aber niemand hort, was geschient
mir?
Ich zerreiBe meine Herz
heraus gerade, um zu wissen,
daB Ich bleed.
Colors, keine kann mich,
keinen sehen kann mich
horen zu schreien
verblassen!

Copyright © Castinova ... [ 2006-03-13 15:35:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: 1500 Jahre (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 03:40:43 PM AEST
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If that is written in english...umm i need glasses...LOL

Re: 1500 Jahre (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:14:06 PM AEST
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Please do re-write. i would love tosee what all really , meant.. I know a lil german, but now, I really would like to see in English. I guess i could decipher, it......msn it would take forever. Good write, from what I could understand.

Brew~

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