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Array ( [sid] => 116321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Hate Everything About You [time] => 2006-03-12 23:36:32 [hometext] => This poem is about how i feel about a guy that I have longed to be with since the first day of this school year. And he hardly even likes me as a friend. [bodytext] => I hate your gorgeous brown eyes,
The eyes that make my heart skip a beat,
Skip a beat everytime with mine they meet.

I hate your buffed up biceps,
The biceps that make me want to crawl into your grasp,
Crawl into your grasp and stay until my very last gasp.

I hate your sparkling smile,
The smile that makes me weak in the knees,
Weak in the knees when directed at me.

I hate everything about you,
What I hate most is that I don't hate you at all,
In fact i love you; but you don't even care enoufh to give me a call.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Cold_Blue_Eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I Hate Everything About You

Contributed by Cold_Blue_Eyes on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:36:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I hate your gorgeous brown eyes,
The eyes that make my heart skip a beat,
Skip a beat everytime with mine they meet.

I hate your buffed up biceps,
The biceps that make me want to crawl into your grasp,
Crawl into your grasp and stay until my very last gasp.

I hate your sparkling smile,
The smile that makes me weak in the knees,
Weak in the knees when directed at me.

I hate everything about you,
What I hate most is that I don't hate you at all,
In fact i love you; but you don't even care enoufh to give me a call.

Copyright © Cold_Blue_Eyes ... [ 2006-03-12 23:36:32]
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Re: I Hate Everything About You (User Rating: 1 )
by wesmaun on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:04:43 AM AEST
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ok im gonna be nice. the ending was kinda forced and corny. and its a bit choppy. but you know its got a great meaning behind it and can really be used to show some feeling.

Re: I Hate Everything About You (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:20:02 AM AEST
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um, well as a poem it was alright, but you made it seem as though you just like him just for his looks....but again that's just the say the poem makes it look...anyway..

~natalya

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