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Dark skies bring nothing but pain,
For when the sun sets, theres nothing to gain.
While you dream, in your pretty little bed,
Im stuck in this hell, tormented by the thoughts in my head.
After all these hours spent alone in this cold silence
My only escape is through drugs and violence.
My brain is numb from this bodily harm,
But i cant resist this bottles charm. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 66 [informant] => EVERxSOxSWEET [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

This Bottles Charm

Contributed by EVERxSOxSWEET on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Dark skies bring nothing but pain,
For when the sun sets, theres nothing to gain.
While you dream, in your pretty little bed,
Im stuck in this hell, tormented by the thoughts in my head.
After all these hours spent alone in this cold silence
My only escape is through drugs and violence.
My brain is numb from this bodily harm,
But i cant resist this bottles charm.

Copyright © EVERxSOxSWEET ... [ 2006-03-07 22:01:47]
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Re: This Bottles Charm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:52:32 PM AEST
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"This bottle's charm": I've never thought of addiction using that metaphor. I like it! Good stuff.

Re: This Bottles Charm (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:55:55 PM AEST
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hello
I have written a lot of poems about drugs
and yes you can escape look within you self
good write
God bless freespirt

Re: This Bottles Charm (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:08:21 PM AEST
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So much said in so little of words...good jobs

ALINA

Re: This Bottles Charm (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:08:28 PM AEST
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So much said in so little of words...good jobs

ALINA

Re: This Bottles Charm (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:08:39 PM AEST
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So much said in so little of words...good jobs

ALINA

Re: This Bottles Charm (User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:50:54 PM AEST
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as one who has fallen for that and other charms I have to say that this writing was amazing

Re: This Bottles Charm (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 07:03:11 PM AEST
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My brain is numb from this bodily harm
but i can't resist this bottles charm.

Great writing, wonderful imagery and playful rhyme
have
been placed along side the very worst of afflictions

keep up the excellent writing and the best of luck.
dw

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