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through
all those lies
you told me
finally i see
what i knew
was true
finally i am the
damaged goods
i always knew
i was
and i was right
about everything
you did
it hurts me
in a way you
could never
understand
it makes
everything
so
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Real

Contributed by DarkFaerie on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

finally i see
through
all those lies
you told me
finally i see
what i knew
was true
finally i am the
damaged goods
i always knew
i was
and i was right
about everything
you did
it hurts me
in a way you
could never
understand
it makes
everything
so
real

Copyright © DarkFaerie ... [ 2006-03-03 18:37:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:41:05 PM AEST
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Short, but truly a great write. Eventhough it is short, i really can feel your hurt and anger. GREAT POEM.

Re: Real (User Rating: 1 )
by ginnginn11 on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:53:35 PM AEST
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i really like this poem i think you could do really well for yourself with these.

Re: Real (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:18:42 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this I liked how it was realistic.. im sure everyone can relate to this at a time .. I know i can thanks for sharing good write indeed
JENNI

Re: Real (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:59:37 PM AEST
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It says so much with so little. I really feel the pain.

Re: Real (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:54:16 AM AEST
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I can feel your pain through your words. this was a powerful and emotional write!!!

hugs
Pix xx

Re: Real (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:03:31 PM AEST
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Mental pain > Physical pain?

Re: Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:30:27 PM AEST
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This hit's the heart of the heart. So much hurt and pain and 2 ask y is an insult in in self as if any would tell us, even if they new. A sad write in deed.

Ben

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