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you're losing your audience
Take off your blinders
They find you unappealing.
What is your story, why make me guess
Its too unclear.
Take some fear and chase it with anxiety
and then maybe it'll start to make sense
But it's funny to watch the whole show
sink or swim
just so you know
you're standing in quicksand and its starting to rain
I think its about time to make a change.
"What," you ask from the challenger
"How the hell should I know, project manager."
For this there is no break
change it now
or I'll be visiting at the wake.
Don't get me wrong I'll bring flowers
but they might be the color of cowards.

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A Night Out at the Cabaret

Contributed by twick on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:01:14 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Puppets and puppeteers
you're losing your audience
Take off your blinders
They find you unappealing.
What is your story, why make me guess
Its too unclear.
Take some fear and chase it with anxiety
and then maybe it'll start to make sense
But it's funny to watch the whole show
sink or swim
just so you know
you're standing in quicksand and its starting to rain
I think its about time to make a change.
"What," you ask from the challenger
"How the hell should I know, project manager."
For this there is no break
change it now
or I'll be visiting at the wake.
Don't get me wrong I'll bring flowers
but they might be the color of cowards.

Copyright © twick ... [ 2006-03-03 00:01:14]
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Re: A Night Out at the Cabaret (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 01:22:49 AM AEST
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a type of poem that makes you feel standing there all alone. where is everyone at lol feeling. rL

Re: A Night Out at the Cabaret (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:35:29 AM AEST
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this is a great poem.
i really like your style of writing i will indeed read more.
"Don't get me wrong I'll bring flowers
but they might be the color of cowards."
i love this

peach

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