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Array ( [sid] => 115713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => new [time] => 2006-03-02 18:17:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => feel the breeze of the ocean
the sound of peace
dancing across my mind

sweet sensation
of long ago
captured in a scent
take me back
if i can handle it

sudden decision
to never look back
never look back
none of it was ever as
good
as i envision now
[i don't want that life]
i'm only facing forward now
my desire to go back has been erased
i'm looking ahead
looking ahead [my peripheral vision fades] [comments] => 3 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 43 [informant] => bittersweet315 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
new

Contributed by bittersweet315 on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:17:37 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



feel the breeze of the ocean
the sound of peace
dancing across my mind

sweet sensation
of long ago
captured in a scent
take me back
if i can handle it

sudden decision
to never look back
never look back
none of it was ever as
good
as i envision now
[i don't want that life]
i'm only facing forward now
my desire to go back has been erased
i'm looking ahead
looking ahead [my peripheral vision fades]




Copyright © bittersweet315 ... [ 2006-03-02 18:17:37]
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Re: new (User Rating: 1 )
by Lenore_Poe15 on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:42:17 PM AEST
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nice write!... somehow it made me feel... good


-Lenore


Re: new (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 10:19:34 PM AEST
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I liked this. This piece seems like you're reaching, reaching for something but not quite there. Keep writing I think you're on the edge of something great


Re: new (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:07:58 PM AEST
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good job you a get star for the day...keep it up




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