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Array ( [sid] => 115306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Body, Heart, and Soul [time] => 2006-02-23 23:25:22 [hometext] => I spent like an hour trying to come up with a poem, then gave up, when all of a sudden THIS came to me. comments? [bodytext] =>
Can't take it, I can't stand this,
What's this horrible, excruciating feeling,
So obsorbing, so devouring
That it conquers my entire being?

Why do i feel so hopeless,
So miserable, wretched, sad,
All I want is to give up...
Crawl into my hidden bed

Lie down and fall asleep,
I don't know whether i want to wake up or not
Just shy away from everything,
Leave my blackened soul to rot

Oh god i'm just so tired,
Of the misery, the pain,
Vanish in the world outside,
Drowning in the pouring rain

Sick of all the shame
Exhausted of this wasted life,
Bleeding out of every pore,
Throw away the crimson knife

Keep strong, relinquish, fight, surrender
Don't shed a single glistening tear,
Shatter the mirror staring back at me,
The end is threatening to come near

A spirit, not me, i'm not here,
Simply scarred, no longer whole,
Flooding, burning, scarlet blood,
Inside body, heart and soul
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Body, Heart, and Soul

Contributed by drtylilsecret on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 11:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




Can't take it, I can't stand this,
What's this horrible, excruciating feeling,
So obsorbing, so devouring
That it conquers my entire being?

Why do i feel so hopeless,
So miserable, wretched, sad,
All I want is to give up...
Crawl into my hidden bed

Lie down and fall asleep,
I don't know whether i want to wake up or not
Just shy away from everything,
Leave my blackened soul to rot

Oh god i'm just so tired,
Of the misery, the pain,
Vanish in the world outside,
Drowning in the pouring rain

Sick of all the shame
Exhausted of this wasted life,
Bleeding out of every pore,
Throw away the crimson knife

Keep strong, relinquish, fight, surrender
Don't shed a single glistening tear,
Shatter the mirror staring back at me,
The end is threatening to come near

A spirit, not me, i'm not here,
Simply scarred, no longer whole,
Flooding, burning, scarlet blood,
Inside body, heart and soul




Copyright © drtylilsecret ... [ 2006-02-23 23:25:22]
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Re: Body, Heart, and Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by hearts4pain on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 09:53:42 AM AEST
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i love this poem...

as i read it..i get to the very end.
and i dont know if thats what u mean by the poem or not but its like the person wasnt themselves...something else was living in their body...some reched soul....hmmm

nice write!


Re: Body, Heart, and Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:31:13 AM AEST
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wow...beautiful word choice and flow and everything...i like this line...
Sick of all the shame
"Exhausted of this wasted life,
Bleeding out of every pore,
Throw away the crimson knife"
it just jumped out at me...dunno why but i like it. absolutely amazing write!!!

- Bethani -


Re: Body, Heart, and Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:31:13 AM AEST
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wow...beautiful word choice and flow and everything...i like this line...
Sick of all the shame
"Exhausted of this wasted life,
Bleeding out of every pore,
Throw away the crimson knife"
it just jumped out at me...dunno why but i like it. absolutely amazing write!!!

- Bethani -


Re: Body, Heart, and Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 03:35:27 PM AEST
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Oh god i'm just so tired,
Of the misery, the pain,
Vanish in the world outside,
Drowning in the pouring rain


Dear Lord, I am so tired of misery and pain
Won't you please take me out of this pouring rain
Vanish those things from away from my eyes
And in my heart come to live in me, make me strong and wise.. amen.. raquelLeah


Re: Body, Heart, and Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 04:34:49 PM AEST
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Wow, and you say my writings beautiful...
Look into that mirror.. Beautiful reflections!
Well done love
Later
~Jay~











Re: Body, Heart, and Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedangel on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:48:05 AM AEST
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heyz i love the poem i can tell how much pain ur in i ave been in this sort of pain i juss love the poem well written
sera




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