Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	03-June 11:38:46 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 114883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (((electric of my eyes))) [time] => 2006-02-15 20:54:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

It’s on the floor and echoes from its origin.
Glistening blood like puddles of a wondered past or future.

My knuckles swell from your jaw and you
are on the ground and you
bleed for me and gasp and choke

for me you die as I love

I can imagine soap and rain.
I can imagine pasty white skin and cigarette smoke in my eyes.

Imagine you as always on the floor
spit a red ooze like the cliché of before.

It doesn’t matter what you think when I stand above you.
Doesn’t matter what you feel when I possess inside of you.

I taste you and your saliva on body parts
I only know when I sleep.

Taste you like friends like
my weeping cartilage.
And it all comes back to you
breathing hard like me and you are blue and red and you know

you’re dead in my head and in my mind.

I’ve ***** you and you’ve bled and you’re blind.

Don’t realize.
Spit and gag.
Choke and cough.
Taste the electric of my eyes,

Heart ravaging rage and
a dead excitement in you and I

and in the clear shining liquid on our lips.

[2006-02-15 03:04:40]

[comments] => 0 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 40 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

(((electric of my eyes)))

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:54:03 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

It’s on the floor and echoes from its origin.
Glistening blood like puddles of a wondered past or future.

My knuckles swell from your jaw and you
are on the ground and you
bleed for me and gasp and choke

for me you die as I love

I can imagine soap and rain.
I can imagine pasty white skin and cigarette smoke in my eyes.

Imagine you as always on the floor
spit a red ooze like the cliché of before.

It doesn’t matter what you think when I stand above you.
Doesn’t matter what you feel when I possess inside of you.

I taste you and your saliva on body parts
I only know when I sleep.

Taste you like friends like
my weeping cartilage.
And it all comes back to you
breathing hard like me and you are blue and red and you know

you’re dead in my head and in my mind.

I’ve ***** you and you’ve bled and you’re blind.

Don’t realize.
Spit and gag.
Choke and cough.
Taste the electric of my eyes,

Heart ravaging rage and
a dead excitement in you and I

and in the clear shining liquid on our lips.

[2006-02-15 03:04:40]

Copyright Â© SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2006-02-15 20:54:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com