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Array ( [sid] => 114621 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Woe is me [time] => 2006-02-10 23:36:57 [hometext] => Feeling six feet under [bodytext] => All by my self
tired of doubting
what I am too do
Is it me or Is it You
Why does the world take
on these strange looks
One day I seem to have it all together
The next day a empty space.
The same ole question over again
Why?

Remembering
when I was younger
Everything seemed to last forever
Taking the good with the bad

I never thought
I'd be alone.

But I am

And whats really eattin me
I wonder where are those folks that
took so much of my youth
and where are those acquintances
I Welcomed in my Home
Sometimes their friendships
left me spent and broken
at times

Was it all my imagnation
I was the Fool
all around

Just a jungle of thoughts ,
dreams and haunts
that wont leave me alone.
A tangled mess of dreams
and dreads
Such a mess
my life is.

Not true to myself
Nor
I am I true to anyone who sees.
Why can't they understand me
The smiles and the laughs are all just
pretend

A protrait
A mental picture
used to fool them all
To hide
deep and calmly and carry
my secert feelings within.
And As I stumble and I fall Up lifes stairway
I get Up
Dust off
And
Try again.

I am worried if I disappoint you
I am feling tired
I have lost much
of the Will
But if Could have that second chance
To do it over again

Why do I feel
It wood all be exactly the same
All Over again.


Whisper [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
Woe is me

Contributed by Whisper on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 11:36:57 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



All by my self
tired of doubting
what I am too do
Is it me or Is it You
Why does the world take
on these strange looks
One day I seem to have it all together
The next day a empty space.
The same ole question over again
Why?

Remembering
when I was younger
Everything seemed to last forever
Taking the good with the bad

I never thought
I'd be alone.

But I am

And whats really eattin me
I wonder where are those folks that
took so much of my youth
and where are those acquintances
I Welcomed in my Home
Sometimes their friendships
left me spent and broken
at times

Was it all my imagnation
I was the Fool
all around

Just a jungle of thoughts ,
dreams and haunts
that wont leave me alone.
A tangled mess of dreams
and dreads
Such a mess
my life is.

Not true to myself
Nor
I am I true to anyone who sees.
Why can't they understand me
The smiles and the laughs are all just
pretend

A protrait
A mental picture
used to fool them all
To hide
deep and calmly and carry
my secert feelings within.
And As I stumble and I fall Up lifes stairway
I get Up
Dust off
And
Try again.

I am worried if I disappoint you
I am feling tired
I have lost much
of the Will
But if Could have that second chance
To do it over again

Why do I feel
It wood all be exactly the same
All Over again.


Whisper




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Re: Woe is me (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:31:41 AM AEST
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You have written and expressed how I feel so often. A very well penned piece of poetry filled with ones struggle within oneself.
I'm a sufferer of depression and I can so much relate to all that u have written. Chin up my friend and may ur days ahead be much brighter.
*warm heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~


Re: Woe is me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:48:53 AM AEST
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And As I stumble and I fall Up lifes stairway
I get Up
Dust off
And
Try again

Awesome writing and I hear ya loud-n-clear.
huggs,
emy


Re: Woe is me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:20:54 PM AEST
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An immensely emotional write.

You reached deep within for this and it must feel
somewhat better to at least get the feelings out
onto paper. I like the style in which this was written.

Great post!

~Breezy




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