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he's looking at the ground
she's always asking why
always bringing him down

conscience goes out the window
self respect through the floor
he's aking when can he go
she tells him there's the door

he's walking out of her life
she begs him please don't go
gives her one last i love you
and then the door slams closed

the sun is setting
and the moon opens it's eyes
to witness this cold night
of sadness and goodbyes
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last goodbyes

Contributed by gah_veh on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:14:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

she's looking at the sky
he's looking at the ground
she's always asking why
always bringing him down

conscience goes out the window
self respect through the floor
he's aking when can he go
she tells him there's the door

he's walking out of her life
she begs him please don't go
gives her one last i love you
and then the door slams closed

the sun is setting
and the moon opens it's eyes
to witness this cold night
of sadness and goodbyes

Copyright © gah_veh ... [ 2006-02-08 17:14:13]
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Re: last goodbyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kayden on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:18:02 PM AEST
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Wow! this is a really great wright...
It keeps you on one thought...
Everything just flows...
Great Job....

Re: last goodbyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:43:06 PM AEST
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It's so true how we take most things in our lives for granted. A sad, emotional and very well penned piece of poetry. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: last goodbyes (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:59:19 AM AEST
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Oh my, I feel this one, extremely sad. Excellent write.

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