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Array ( [sid] => 114419 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Between The Lines [time] => 2006-02-07 07:50:58 [hometext] => Read all the capital letters to find the meaning of this poem [bodytext] => Anticipate a change for a better life,
Nevertheless i'm still happy inside,
Guessing that jesus help me find my path,
Eventually showing the pedestal where i may stand,
Learning all i will ever need to know to succeed,
Serving my time because heaven seems eternally unseen,
~
AND the serene turns into a fate that's unclean,
~
Despite those words i got a devil looking over my shoulder,
Exhaling deeply with thoughts extremely vulgar,
My mind is torn in two and i'm stuck in the middle,
Onslaughts of devastation i imagined where the oceans ripple,
Nesting in my brain as an inevitable reality,
Skeptical if we will ever regain humanity... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 73 [informant] => dvsnme816 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

In Between The Lines

Contributed by dvsnme816 on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 07:50:58 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Anticipate a change for a better life,
Nevertheless i'm still happy inside,
Guessing that jesus help me find my path,
Eventually showing the pedestal where i may stand,
Learning all i will ever need to know to succeed,
Serving my time because heaven seems eternally unseen,
~
AND the serene turns into a fate that's unclean,
~
Despite those words i got a devil looking over my shoulder,
Exhaling deeply with thoughts extremely vulgar,
My mind is torn in two and i'm stuck in the middle,
Onslaughts of devastation i imagined where the oceans ripple,
Nesting in my brain as an inevitable reality,
Skeptical if we will ever regain humanity...

Copyright © dvsnme816 ... [ 2006-02-07 07:50:58]
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Re: In Between The Lines (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 02:06:51 PM AEST
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Very well done, a constant battle between good and evil, I think we all struggle with choosing the right path at some point, being at the crossroads, I feel it is never to late to choose the right path

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LG

Re: In Between The Lines (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 10:37:43 PM AEST
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Nice write. Clever with the first letters thing. Good use of the words to hold the reader for the second and then introduce the other thought. Good write. I enjoyed it.

Whisper

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