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Array ( [sid] => 114168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Raquel and God [time] => 2006-02-02 20:15:45 [hometext] => i miss her [bodytext] => Raquel and God

Raquel said the moon
is hanging low tonite
then she said, dont it look like...
a big old headlite?

and then she said
why is there a headlite up in the sky?
i looked at Raquel...
and said, dont ask me why

but there was only one
headlite we could see
and Raquel said, she's been told
God rides on a Harley

then i said maybe its God
out for a ride
Raquel said...
we better hide

so we hide out
all that nite
me and Raqy
made our own lite......

but not Raquels gone
no longer with me
shes riding with God
on the back of his Harley

i saw em ride by
just the other nite
yeah i saw, in the sky...
a big ole headlite [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 22 [informant] => donnieH [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Raquel and God

Contributed by donnieH on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 08:15:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Raquel and God

Raquel said the moon
is hanging low tonite
then she said, dont it look like...
a big old headlite?

and then she said
why is there a headlite up in the sky?
i looked at Raquel...
and said, dont ask me why

but there was only one
headlite we could see
and Raquel said, she's been told
God rides on a Harley

then i said maybe its God
out for a ride
Raquel said...
we better hide

so we hide out
all that nite
me and Raqy
made our own lite......

but not Raquels gone
no longer with me
shes riding with God
on the back of his Harley

i saw em ride by
just the other nite
yeah i saw, in the sky...
a big ole headlite

Copyright © donnieH ... [ 2006-02-02 20:15:45]
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Re: Raquel and God (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 10:52:24 PM AEST
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A very sweet and fitting tribute. I reallyy enjoyed this, as I too have recently had to experience a painful loss. My thoughts are with you, and please keep writing...

Re: Raquel and God (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 09:08:11 AM AEST
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First of all, I would not have asked why, second of all, I would never hide from that Light, third of all, yes, I ride with the Lord always.. fourth of all, it was a panhead charley, 1948 FLH 74, black and silver... mounted on a 1958 swing arm frame.. cost was $10,000 in the plate.. good kickn bike, fifth of all, my best friend helped me put that poem together, sixth of all, thank you for posting, seventh of all, glad to hear from you again, eighth of all, how are you doing with the music, nineth of all, let me know if you need more lyrics, tenth of all, I am with the Lord, whats with the verse here .... so we hide out
all that nite
me and Raqy
made our own lite......

Thank you for the poem, love and hugs from Michael and I... Raquel Leah...

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