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Array ( [sid] => 114149 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Believe [time] => 2006-02-02 14:52:56 [hometext] => This poem is very important to me hope you all appreciate it too... [bodytext] =>

..Believe...

U helped me Believe,
that I matter.
Now you're gone,
I used to have her.
Where did I go wrong?
You've made me sadder.

What I want, What i need,
I want to believe,
not only in me,
but in destiny.
Do we follow, into tomorrow,
a set path?
You, and love,
maybe somethings I'll never get back.

I 'm worn and been torn.
We started to die from the second we were born.
Live in the present, Live in the real,
Live in you.
I want to believe that love is true.

To gain meaning, I want to be believing.
I don't want to be seeing you leaving.
Where is life leading me to?
Help me to believe,
that what I'm doing is the rite thing to do.

Who is right for who?
I want you,
to make me believe,
that I'm here for a reason.
Seasons, dont seem to last
they pass
in seconds.

You must come son when God Beckons.

Already I believe I've learned so many lessons,
From the mistakes
that I've made and make.
You become your srongest at the points
where you almost break.
There are the real and the fake,
you choose what path you wish to take.
Choices, Voices, sometimes its too easy to hate.

I want to Believe,
that I'm something.
To conceive,
the feeling of not being nothing.
Its so appealing,
Just like you.

You see, I want to believe that love is true. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 21 [informant] => moses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Believe

Contributed by moses on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 02:52:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

..Believe...

U helped me Believe,
that I matter.
Now you're gone,
I used to have her.
Where did I go wrong?
You've made me sadder.

What I want, What i need,
I want to believe,
not only in me,
but in destiny.
Do we follow, into tomorrow,
a set path?
You, and love,
maybe somethings I'll never get back.

I 'm worn and been torn.
We started to die from the second we were born.
Live in the present, Live in the real,
Live in you.
I want to believe that love is true.

To gain meaning, I want to be believing.
I don't want to be seeing you leaving.
Where is life leading me to?
Help me to believe,
that what I'm doing is the rite thing to do.

Who is right for who?
I want you,
to make me believe,
that I'm here for a reason.
Seasons, dont seem to last
they pass
in seconds.

You must come son when God Beckons.

Already I believe I've learned so many lessons,
From the mistakes
that I've made and make.
You become your srongest at the points
where you almost break.
There are the real and the fake,
you choose what path you wish to take.
Choices, Voices, sometimes its too easy to hate.

I want to Believe,
that I'm something.
To conceive,
the feeling of not being nothing.
Its so appealing,
Just like you.

You see, I want to believe that love is true.

Copyright © moses ... [ 2006-02-02 14:52:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:30:45 PM AEST
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wow thats alot to take in good write with alot of good to say ty for posting

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 04:19:47 PM AEST
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...very good...a strongly felt blending of the mind, the heart, the soul and the spirit...poetry...I sense that your spirit is very much alive and unwilling to settle for a compromise...restless...searching...a lot of us have been there...most of us who have been there are still there...well, somewhere that might as well be there...it seems like a treadmill, sometimes, but it isn't...it's just a very long journey...

...thanks for sharing,

...ron...enigma

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:38:15 PM AEST
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~*Moses*~
I just had to come back to visit ur pages and I'm so glad I did. You are gifted writer who has the ability to be able to express his inner thoughts and feelings so well.

I want to Believe,
that I'm something.
To conceive,
the feeling of not being nothing.
Its so appealing,
Just like you.

You see, I want to believe that love is true.

I too, my friend want to believe that love is true. An excellent and very well detailed heartfelt write ~*Moses*~Keep up the awesome work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

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