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Array ( [sid] => 113930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Notice Me [time] => 2006-01-29 02:59:48 [hometext] => this speaks for itself [bodytext] => I thought I’d be able to hang on.
I should have known that your love for me would pass.
I guess there’s no changing feelings once they’re gone.
I’m still foolishly living in the past.

When you used to notice me.

Seems you loved me when I wasn’t so broken down yet.
I can’t recall when or why,
But now there’s nothing left.
Its not here tonight.

You don’t notice me.

“How was your day?”, maybe you’ll ask back.
I undress right before your eyes, you don’t even glance.
And I stare at you for hours, you never react.
Take a shower, but you don’t take that chance.

You don’t notice me.

I understand if you just don’t love me enough.
Could you just pretend?
When I walk by you, try to look up.
Have a little mercy on the heart you were given.

Please notice me.

You no longer wipe the tears from my eyes.
Where do I begin with everything I must undo?
I’m still living as if you’re what keeps me alive.
Where did I go wrong in loving you?

Won’t you notice me?
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Notice Me

Contributed by pisces101 on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:59:48 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I thought I’d be able to hang on.
I should have known that your love for me would pass.
I guess there’s no changing feelings once they’re gone.
I’m still foolishly living in the past.

When you used to notice me.

Seems you loved me when I wasn’t so broken down yet.
I can’t recall when or why,
But now there’s nothing left.
Its not here tonight.

You don’t notice me.

“How was your day?”, maybe you’ll ask back.
I undress right before your eyes, you don’t even glance.
And I stare at you for hours, you never react.
Take a shower, but you don’t take that chance.

You don’t notice me.

I understand if you just don’t love me enough.
Could you just pretend?
When I walk by you, try to look up.
Have a little mercy on the heart you were given.

Please notice me.

You no longer wipe the tears from my eyes.
Where do I begin with everything I must undo?
I’m still living as if you’re what keeps me alive.
Where did I go wrong in loving you?

Won’t you notice me?




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Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:36:54 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifull.
huggs,
emy


Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:40:43 AM AEST
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Wow...a beautiful write you have here. So full of sadness and pure emotion. I've been there. Wonderful work.


Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by from_first_to_last on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 10:50:48 AM AEST
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WOW. thats very emotional. i was about to cry.i luved it a lot. thats why i luv poetry cause its hard to express feeling when your talking to someone about them but when you write its like theres not enough words to describe how you feel




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