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Array ( [sid] => 113308 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breakup [time] => 2006-01-17 03:07:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Love is a river that pools in your heart
It thrives in your soul and it's missing a part
That part is a girl who may be your wife
But she's also the one that may ruin your life
Don't think these words are meant to bring you down
They're here to remind you when I'm not around
That life's not all roses and peaches and cream
Sometimes you must stand and fight for your dream

My advice comes to you through my view of pain
A time when I loved once, when I loved in vain
The girl that I loved was perfect for me
At least I though I knew we were meant to be
For once in my life I was living a dream
But Life's not all roses and peaches and cream
I was sitting at work on that fateful day
I'm telling you nothing was going my way

The love of my life had just called my cell
She spoke a few words, she had something to tell
She said her love for me was no more
It was then on that day that my heart hit the floor
I told her to wait, to come see me at home
So that we could talk somewhere we're alone
So I pulled out our pictures and laid them all out
I set out the candles in the room all about

Then I waited for her to walk through the door
And then when she did SHE dropped to the floor
I looked to her face and watched for a smile
But instead I found an expression so vile
she looked to my eyes and what did I see?
A face full of anger, "Ken, Why do this to me?"
"Do this to you? What the hell do you mean?
You are the one that did this to me."

It had been so many years since I really cried
But then on that day my eyes couldn't be dried
My heart was broken by the love of my life
I thought she just may have been my future wife
So I live my life one day at a time
Waiting for someone who longs to be mine
I thought for a while I was living my dream...
But Life's not all roses and peaches and cream [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Geken [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Breakup

Contributed by Geken on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:07:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Love is a river that pools in your heart
It thrives in your soul and it's missing a part
That part is a girl who may be your wife
But she's also the one that may ruin your life
Don't think these words are meant to bring you down
They're here to remind you when I'm not around
That life's not all roses and peaches and cream
Sometimes you must stand and fight for your dream

My advice comes to you through my view of pain
A time when I loved once, when I loved in vain
The girl that I loved was perfect for me
At least I though I knew we were meant to be
For once in my life I was living a dream
But Life's not all roses and peaches and cream
I was sitting at work on that fateful day
I'm telling you nothing was going my way

The love of my life had just called my cell
She spoke a few words, she had something to tell
She said her love for me was no more
It was then on that day that my heart hit the floor
I told her to wait, to come see me at home
So that we could talk somewhere we're alone
So I pulled out our pictures and laid them all out
I set out the candles in the room all about

Then I waited for her to walk through the door
And then when she did SHE dropped to the floor
I looked to her face and watched for a smile
But instead I found an expression so vile
she looked to my eyes and what did I see?
A face full of anger, "Ken, Why do this to me?"
"Do this to you? What the hell do you mean?
You are the one that did this to me."

It had been so many years since I really cried
But then on that day my eyes couldn't be dried
My heart was broken by the love of my life
I thought she just may have been my future wife
So I live my life one day at a time
Waiting for someone who longs to be mine
I thought for a while I was living my dream...
But Life's not all roses and peaches and cream




Copyright © Geken ... [ 2006-01-17 03:07:55]
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Re: Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:08:24 AM AEST
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Sad but it's a very good write.
One day at a time is the way.
huggs,
emy


Re: Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 05:06:50 AM AEST
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I think as your poem says all live one day at a time. I know I do bernard2


Re: Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:32:51 AM AEST
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Simply amazing, I loved it :)
It's sad and true
Love brings the biggest happiness but also
the worst sadness.




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