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Array ( [sid] => 113044 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So I Can Spit In Your Face [time] => 2006-01-12 14:07:26 [hometext] => ~**** you all~weepingprophet (my defiant streak is alive and kicking!) [bodytext] => **** you all who never said
I was something to believe in
And take your condemnation with you
When you decide you’re leaving

I’ve had enough of talk and sex
Enough to last a lifetime
I’ve had enough of the bitter tests
Provoking me to crime

Leave my hands wrapped in guilt
For ending your dishonesty
I’m sick to death of how I’ve felt
I’m ending you honestly

**** you all who never said
I was something to dream in
And take your proud ignorant eyes
Shut them when you’re leaving
Because believe me
I believe in your dishonesty
And wrapped in guilt
I’ll honestly
End the bitter tests and crime
Open your blind eyes just one time

So I can spit in your face
**** you all
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So I Can Spit In Your Face

Contributed by weepingprophet on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 02:07:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

**** you all who never said
I was something to believe in
And take your condemnation with you
When you decide you’re leaving

I’ve had enough of talk and sex
Enough to last a lifetime
I’ve had enough of the bitter tests
Provoking me to crime

Leave my hands wrapped in guilt
For ending your dishonesty
I’m sick to death of how I’ve felt
I’m ending you honestly

**** you all who never said
I was something to dream in
And take your proud ignorant eyes
Shut them when you’re leaving
Because believe me
I believe in your dishonesty
And wrapped in guilt
I’ll honestly
End the bitter tests and crime
Open your blind eyes just one time

So I can spit in your face
**** you all

Copyright Â© weepingprophet ... [ 2006-01-12 14:07:26]
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Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:34:19 PM AEST
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wow you sound like me lol great write and yea **** them all

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Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:55:57 PM AEST
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awesome! i take back what i said in my previous comment. hehe, very well done. how i love your poems!

Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 02:12:46 PM AEST
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It's a viscious tongue lashing if i ever heard
one... it's great to write a piece that tells
exactly what you feel without the paint and
polish.

"So i can spit in your face"

it's raw, brutal and honest...
keep it up

Re: So I Can Spit In Your Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 12:25:37 PM AEST
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Your defiant streak is definitely alive and kicking.That's certainly telling them,In your own inimitable way.I've read many of your poems today,they are all quality writes.I particularly liked 'The Remains Of Us'.
A page to remember,

Den

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