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Array ( [sid] => 11298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => what more can i ask for [time] => 2003-01-26 05:20:00 [hometext] => all we need is,,,,,,,,,,,,,, [bodytext] => I sit here,all lone,,,
wondering why,,
is to be alone,,

darkness all around,,
shedding light to see,,
why does it have to be this way,,

no one knows,,
the reason's why,,
men,,even cry,,,

tomorrow, will be here,,
darkness still lingers,,
still all alone,,

what does a man,,
have to do,,
to break this silence?,,

tomorrow will never know,,
whats in store,,
for a man,,
with tear in his eye's,,

he goes on,,the best way he can..
searching for love,,
happiness,,lifetime,,
for someone,,

he will break the silence,,
he will see,
he will overcom the blackness,,
this is he,,

one who know's,,
right from wrong,,
know's what love ,,
has in store for him,,

nothing is wrong,,
in his eye's..
no tears,,
just joy,,

for he has seen the things that ,,
blinded him,,but,,,
now he see's
the truth,,behind it all,,

only time can give him love,,
happiness,joy,,a lifetime,,
what more can he ask for,,

she will be there in his heart,,
for he knows he truth,,she gave him,,
love,,happiness,,forever,,
what more can he ask for,,,
one dozen rose's,for her,,,,


craig s, meeks
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 43 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
what more can i ask for

Contributed by spooky on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I sit here,all lone,,,
wondering why,,
is to be alone,,

darkness all around,,
shedding light to see,,
why does it have to be this way,,

no one knows,,
the reason's why,,
men,,even cry,,,

tomorrow, will be here,,
darkness still lingers,,
still all alone,,

what does a man,,
have to do,,
to break this silence?,,

tomorrow will never know,,
whats in store,,
for a man,,
with tear in his eye's,,

he goes on,,the best way he can..
searching for love,,
happiness,,lifetime,,
for someone,,

he will break the silence,,
he will see,
he will overcom the blackness,,
this is he,,

one who know's,,
right from wrong,,
know's what love ,,
has in store for him,,

nothing is wrong,,
in his eye's..
no tears,,
just joy,,

for he has seen the things that ,,
blinded him,,but,,,
now he see's
the truth,,behind it all,,

only time can give him love,,
happiness,joy,,a lifetime,,
what more can he ask for,,

she will be there in his heart,,
for he knows he truth,,she gave him,,
love,,happiness,,forever,,
what more can he ask for,,,
one dozen rose's,for her,,,,


craig s, meeks




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Re: what more can i ask for (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 06:07:34 AM AEST
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A sad, heartfelt and very loving poem Craig
Chrissie


Re: what more can i ask for (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:15:31 AM AEST
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Craig,a very touching peice,well written,So many guys go through this! Good write! Christina


Re: what more can i ask for (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 10:46:20 AM AEST
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beautiful my friend


Re: what more can i ask for (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 08:18:00 PM AEST
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awwwww how sweet my friend, lovely..




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