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Array ( [sid] => 112879 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lucky [time] => 2006-01-10 00:54:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've never been the kind that you call lucky, but on June 16, 2005-that all changed
I never knew someone like you could love me
I never knew it could be this way
Never knew someone could make me feel this way
I have so many GREAT memories, and now that its all changed could I forget the way it feels to touch you
All the great times we've been through, and turning my back isn't that easy and I can't watch you walk away
Could I wake up without you everyday??
I know I could say we're through and tell myself I'm over you.....But I can't seem to give up on us now!!!
I try to hide the truth inside
Could I forget the look that tells me that you want me....And all the reasons that make lovin' you so easy??
The kiss that always makes it hard to breathe
The way you knew just what I was going through in love and life
So please I'm asking you not to give up on us now!!!
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 24 [informant] => LanieBug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Lucky

Contributed by LanieBug on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 12:54:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I've never been the kind that you call lucky, but on June 16, 2005-that all changed
I never knew someone like you could love me
I never knew it could be this way
Never knew someone could make me feel this way
I have so many GREAT memories, and now that its all changed could I forget the way it feels to touch you
All the great times we've been through, and turning my back isn't that easy and I can't watch you walk away
Could I wake up without you everyday??
I know I could say we're through and tell myself I'm over you.....But I can't seem to give up on us now!!!
I try to hide the truth inside
Could I forget the look that tells me that you want me....And all the reasons that make lovin' you so easy??
The kiss that always makes it hard to breathe
The way you knew just what I was going through in love and life
So please I'm asking you not to give up on us now!!!




Copyright © LanieBug ... [ 2006-01-10 00:54:24]
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Re: Lucky (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:00:23 AM AEST
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I pray it works out for you,because love is the most important thing on earth.I loved the emotion in your poem.It was beautiful.



Brian


Re: Lucky (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:23:19 AM AEST
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Good write keep em comin'


Re: Lucky (User Rating: 1 )
by cheralex on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:41:54 AM AEST
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Geeze, I feel ike I've been there before... hope it all works out for you.




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