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[title] => Breaking Point
[time] => 2005-12-28 15:39:52
[hometext] => This tells a story. Something snapped in me and I had to write. I didn't know how else to get rid of the rush of emotion I was feeling.
[bodytext] => So then something snapped inside of me; suddenly... I'm hanging only by a thread. Thread of you, thread of me. The wounds beneath are fresh and bloody. I'm all alone, you've abandoned what there was left to kill in me. Here I dangle. Stifling the helpless tears. This empty chasm beneath, so peaceful. Dangling, I kick and scream Don't let me go too far over the edge. Don't let me slip into oblivion. The thread snaps. Temptation. The break down is so bitter sweet; it gorges itself on my misery. Empty monstrosity growing inside my wretched body... break down, break free. Tear the hurt away from my pale skin; make me raw again. Leave no room for tears and shame; take your place. Pulsing, pulsing, pulsing... Thrive iside these cold, blue veins. Oh Lord, oh God, I can't stand the pain. Let me plummet down beneath icey waves. Empty darkness... I don't have sanity for loss. Don't... Don't make a sound. Take me away where nothiness fills my mind. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 52 [informant] => LittleMissWonderful [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
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