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Array ( [sid] => 11195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Time Machine [time] => 2003-01-25 10:30:00 [hometext] => ................... [bodytext] => If I had a time machine
I would go back in time,
to the one that I went to fast for
the one that I thought was for life…
to when we first met and tell myself that to take it slow
Like the old Peabody cartoon
and his "Way Back Machine"…
But I guess my heart wanted hers so bad,
I guess I couldn't see that
I was pushing her so hard.
Just wanted to make her happy,
wanted her to see how well
she could be treated
but I don't know where I went wrong,
although I know what I did incorrect
in I treated her heart like it was mine,
I do that sometimes…
But I think the reason I did that
was because I thought we was meant to be together
meant to show each other true love…
meant to be in our lives together
I know some day that may still happen
but who knows where our hearts will be then?
Who knows how you or I will feel about each other?
Will I still cherish you? Yes, nothing ever will change that,
Will I still love you? Yes, I will always love you?
It wont be easy to leave your heart behind,
But I guess I will have too………………
Because I know what we did was wrong,
We went way to fast… I wish that I could change that
but I can't change history or the past.
I will just tell myself to take it slower the next time!
That's what I planned to do with her heart,
But I didn't… and I'm regretting it now…
That I could have been a little slower,
on her heart, not went so fast.
But I do know this…
I will always call you by
your beautiful name
My beautiful Blue-Eyed Angel! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 16 [informant] => panther_1978 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Time Machine

Contributed by panther_1978 on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

If I had a time machine
I would go back in time,
to the one that I went to fast for
the one that I thought was for life…
to when we first met and tell myself that to take it slow
Like the old Peabody cartoon
and his "Way Back Machine"…
But I guess my heart wanted hers so bad,
I guess I couldn't see that
I was pushing her so hard.
Just wanted to make her happy,
wanted her to see how well
she could be treated
but I don't know where I went wrong,
although I know what I did incorrect
in I treated her heart like it was mine,
I do that sometimes…
But I think the reason I did that
was because I thought we was meant to be together
meant to show each other true love…
meant to be in our lives together
I know some day that may still happen
but who knows where our hearts will be then?
Who knows how you or I will feel about each other?
Will I still cherish you? Yes, nothing ever will change that,
Will I still love you? Yes, I will always love you?
It wont be easy to leave your heart behind,
But I guess I will have too………………
Because I know what we did was wrong,
We went way to fast… I wish that I could change that
but I can't change history or the past.
I will just tell myself to take it slower the next time!
That's what I planned to do with her heart,
But I didn't… and I'm regretting it now…
That I could have been a little slower,
on her heart, not went so fast.
But I do know this…
I will always call you by
your beautiful name
My beautiful Blue-Eyed Angel!

Copyright Â© panther_1978 ... [ 2003-01-25 10:30:00]
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Re: Time Machine (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:59:20 PM AEST
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Awww... Panther with a heart like yours, the girls should be lining up. ;) (I would, lol...) This is beautiful and honest... I hope whomever it is for reads it and takes it to heart
This non rhyming style looks good on ya by the way... Good write

Re: Time Machine (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 07:01:14 PM AEST
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Well, I like ryming poetry but my style of writing is with non-ryming words... I feel that you can express yourself better with non-ryming poetry but thats just me.... Thank you Dani :)

Re: Time Machine (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:40:50 AM AEST
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Panther this was so heartfelt,your love is strong,we all wish we could go back in time to change things! This was a great peice! Christina

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