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Array ( [sid] => 111800 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From under your feet [time] => 2005-12-20 01:25:27 [hometext] => im trying to help a friend and im lost in worlds of darkness, im trying to escape through words [bodytext] => Robbed of trust and faith
You lie in a heap on the ground
She has filled your mind with hate
As your tears fall without a sound

Lost to the hands i reach out with
You remain where she pulled the rug from under your feet
Trying in vain i grab at your heart
Where the stabs she made still bleed

Endlessly you try to heal
As the world continues to spin
I share the anguish you feel
We won't let this darkness win

I'll pick up the pieces that you throw away
Ignoring the knife you placed in my back
Uncontrollable urges fill your day
Consumed only by what you lack

I will wait for your sun to return
But as mine sets behind another man
I will continue to burn
Always the light to which you ran
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From under your feet

Contributed by guiltycircles on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 01:25:27 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Robbed of trust and faith
You lie in a heap on the ground
She has filled your mind with hate
As your tears fall without a sound

Lost to the hands i reach out with
You remain where she pulled the rug from under your feet
Trying in vain i grab at your heart
Where the stabs she made still bleed

Endlessly you try to heal
As the world continues to spin
I share the anguish you feel
We won't let this darkness win

I'll pick up the pieces that you throw away
Ignoring the knife you placed in my back
Uncontrollable urges fill your day
Consumed only by what you lack

I will wait for your sun to return
But as mine sets behind another man
I will continue to burn
Always the light to which you ran

Copyright © guiltycircles ... [ 2005-12-20 01:25:27]
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Re: From under your feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 03:16:10 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, Soph!
who's it for? i'm sure they will love it.
love you millions honey, your bestest friend
Caiti XoXo

Re: From under your feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 02:59:52 AM AEST
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Wow...This is such a lovely write! I especially liked the last stanza. Nice work!

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