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Array ( [sid] => 111744 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hate This World [time] => 2005-12-19 09:31:26 [hometext] => Soz but i don't think its finished so hope u all like it and plz leave comments, but if u only got negatives keep 'em to urself! [bodytext] => I hate this world,
because i twirled into it
with life on my side
but hate in the shadows

May i leave this world?
The blades look soo inviting
No one's invading

Out of this world,
i twirl again
but i'm being pulled back by...YOU!
No! No! Leave Me Bee!
No!... i love you...soo i can't let u!

You must love me, u havent let go of me yet...
thats cos i dont want to
but its your bedtime isnt it?
i'd stay awake just to watch u sleep
and watch over you,
just to know that you're ok. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 439 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Devils-confused-daugther [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Hate This World

Contributed by Devils-confused-daugther on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 09:31:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I hate this world,
because i twirled into it
with life on my side
but hate in the shadows

May i leave this world?
The blades look soo inviting
No one's invading

Out of this world,
i twirl again
but i'm being pulled back by...YOU!
No! No! Leave Me Bee!
No!... i love you...soo i can't let u!

You must love me, u havent let go of me yet...
thats cos i dont want to
but its your bedtime isnt it?
i'd stay awake just to watch u sleep
and watch over you,
just to know that you're ok.

Copyright © Devils-confused-daugther ... [ 2005-12-19 09:31:26]
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Re: Hate This World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 12:44:07 PM AEST
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The world was designed with love, and because of hate, the design was altered, became much different. Since the change, man has not learned his lesson, yet He must soon; we all better pray the second coming will come, before we completely destroy our world and ourselves. At the end of your poem, I could not help but to read in love, from whoever was speaking. Those are the words I hear when I pray, that He stays awake for me, and the world, watching over all that invite Him in for our safety, so that we will be ok. I very much appreciate your poem. Raquelleah

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