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Array ( [sid] => 111607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Undusted Memories [time] => 2005-12-16 17:50:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your a lot like my favorite pair of jeans
That I will never fit again
Great while I was in my teens
But now if I tried to fit in your life I would not know where to begin
We were so perfect
Not a chip on our shoulder
But that is done and recent love you cannot expect
Because now we are much older
And my heart couldnt chance it
I couldnt speak of it
Not even second glance it
There is no need of it
I loved, but now I have let go
And..
My beloved, These things you already know
Whats done is done
It's old and rusted
You werent the one
The memories are left undusted
Just remeber the good times
Minus the bad
That I was yours and you were once mine
And that my love...
Was the best love this world ever had [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 22 [informant] => poetic_influence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Undusted Memories

Contributed by poetic_influence on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 05:50:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Your a lot like my favorite pair of jeans
That I will never fit again
Great while I was in my teens
But now if I tried to fit in your life I would not know where to begin
We were so perfect
Not a chip on our shoulder
But that is done and recent love you cannot expect
Because now we are much older
And my heart couldnt chance it
I couldnt speak of it
Not even second glance it
There is no need of it
I loved, but now I have let go
And..
My beloved, These things you already know
Whats done is done
It's old and rusted
You werent the one
The memories are left undusted
Just remeber the good times
Minus the bad
That I was yours and you were once mine
And that my love...
Was the best love this world ever had

Copyright © poetic_influence ... [ 2005-12-16 17:50:55]
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Re: Undusted Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by WaterFountainOfTears on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 02:03:42 AM AEST
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Very interesting similies here ... It's ashame when such a strong love is broken... You seem strong, you'll get through it. Good luck

Re: Undusted Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Inspirational101 on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:30:44 PM AEST
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Hey,
I can really relate to this poem, its great, but so sad. Keep writing,
With love,
Inspirational101

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