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Array ( [sid] => 11151 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Way To A Better Day: Away From Yesterday [time] => 2003-01-24 18:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When suddenly everything change to dark
And the smallest fish turn into shark

When all the doors seem to be locked in your face
And in this wide world you can't find your place

When doing your best is no longer enough
As the life become so hard and tough

when the mountains you've climbed collapse on your head
When you wish for the end as you envy the dead

When the rainbow is erased by rainy coulds
When the laughters are killed by tears and chouts

When all what you've worked for is gone to haste
Don't think about those years you've waste

Step on your past , your pain, your sorrow
Believe in better chances of tomorrow

Weeping and mourning will do no good
Putting behind is what you should

Walk straight, don't ever look back
Find your way in another track

Search for the light ,seize every dawn
Aim the moon , not the burning sun
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 21 [informant] => GINA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
A Way To A Better Day: Away From Yesterday

Contributed by GINA on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



When suddenly everything change to dark
And the smallest fish turn into shark

When all the doors seem to be locked in your face
And in this wide world you can't find your place

When doing your best is no longer enough
As the life become so hard and tough

when the mountains you've climbed collapse on your head
When you wish for the end as you envy the dead

When the rainbow is erased by rainy coulds
When the laughters are killed by tears and chouts

When all what you've worked for is gone to haste
Don't think about those years you've waste

Step on your past , your pain, your sorrow
Believe in better chances of tomorrow

Weeping and mourning will do no good
Putting behind is what you should

Walk straight, don't ever look back
Find your way in another track

Search for the light ,seize every dawn
Aim the moon , not the burning sun




Copyright © GINA ... [ 2003-01-24 18:00:00]
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Re: A Way To A Better Day: Away From Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 07:27:30 PM AEST
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fabulous journey, great write, thanks for sharing this one


Re: A Way To A Better Day: Away From Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 07:55:37 PM AEST
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This was so wonderfully done I liked this write! Christina


Re: A Way To A Better Day: Away From Yesterday (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:15:35 AM AEST
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ok


Re: A Way To A Better Day: Away From Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:19:23 PM AEST
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Great advice Gina, but have you done this yourself?, have you found your way away from yesterday?




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