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Array ( [sid] => 11143 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide [time] => 2003-01-24 16:40:00 [hometext] => This is about..me. Yeah, the title and poem should say it all. [bodytext] => I take the knife and slide it across my wrist.
As the blood drips down, I make a fist.
The fist clenches a note to those I loved and cared for,
But they never cared for me. As I think about my life,
I feel my heartbeat fade. I hear my breath, and it's getting
Lower. I close my eyes, and feel them turning gray. I wait
for my new life, and it's coming soon. As I take my last breath,
I whisper one word. The word says how I felt, how I thought and
how I dealt. Hate, was the word. I know you knew that, cause that's
all I felt from you. If you read my note, you would have known what to do.
To say three words to me would have kept me alive a little longer.
But I'm gone now, and I'm feeling stronger. You remember I tried, right before
I committed this suicide. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Slipknot555666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Suicide

Contributed by Slipknot555666 on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I take the knife and slide it across my wrist.
As the blood drips down, I make a fist.
The fist clenches a note to those I loved and cared for,
But they never cared for me. As I think about my life,
I feel my heartbeat fade. I hear my breath, and it's getting
Lower. I close my eyes, and feel them turning gray. I wait
for my new life, and it's coming soon. As I take my last breath,
I whisper one word. The word says how I felt, how I thought and
how I dealt. Hate, was the word. I know you knew that, cause that's
all I felt from you. If you read my note, you would have known what to do.
To say three words to me would have kept me alive a little longer.
But I'm gone now, and I'm feeling stronger. You remember I tried, right before
I committed this suicide.

Copyright © Slipknot555666 ... [ 2003-01-24 16:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:21:42 PM AEST
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Yes... the poem said it all. So beautifully sad. I hope to read more from you.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 07:41:22 PM AEST
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Remember those three words "I love you" we need you here, if you don't here them from your own family, please talk to someone, you write beautiful but it also concerns me being you are so young, I've worked with many children, please seek help

Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Slipknot555666 on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 03:30:04 AM AEST
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Hey, thanks dude. I'm glad at least someone reads my stuff. I appreciate it. ::hugs::

Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by happybunnyfan on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:59:10 AM AEST
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thats how i feel,u say it so good kept it up
slipknot rocks
i love their new look,

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