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Array ( [sid] => 111310 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Slow Dance [time] => 2005-12-11 22:10:19 [hometext] => All you slow dance lovers out there, this ones for you....AND my Jacob lol. [bodytext] => Bringing forth some passion.
Followed closely by some care...
It's so easy to tell you love me,
And to acknowledge that you're there.

When we press our hands together,
I note the wonder that it brings.
And you carry me to dreamland,
While the stereo softly sings.

Our feet carry a pattern,
And I'm put into a trance.
The stars will blind each other,
While we step in our slow dance.

The room gets fairly darker,
There's a candle in your eyes.
It's a tiny glare of color,
Of which my eyes have been aprised.

I can feel your arms around me,
Sending shivers up my spine.
Our shadows shift upon the wall,
Fulfilling their own design.

Your kisses are of radiance,
Each one new to the world.
I'm dancing with my Angel,
You're dancing with your Babygirl.

You bring me oh so closer,
And your intentions are so well known.
I'm taken back down memory lane,
Escorted by your cologne.

The song is coming to its end,
But the night is still filled with chance.
You're kisses will still perservere,
Long after our slow dance...

...I love you Angel... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 370 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jacobskk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Slow Dance

Contributed by jacobskk on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:10:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Bringing forth some passion.
Followed closely by some care...
It's so easy to tell you love me,
And to acknowledge that you're there.

When we press our hands together,
I note the wonder that it brings.
And you carry me to dreamland,
While the stereo softly sings.

Our feet carry a pattern,
And I'm put into a trance.
The stars will blind each other,
While we step in our slow dance.

The room gets fairly darker,
There's a candle in your eyes.
It's a tiny glare of color,
Of which my eyes have been aprised.

I can feel your arms around me,
Sending shivers up my spine.
Our shadows shift upon the wall,
Fulfilling their own design.

Your kisses are of radiance,
Each one new to the world.
I'm dancing with my Angel,
You're dancing with your Babygirl.

You bring me oh so closer,
And your intentions are so well known.
I'm taken back down memory lane,
Escorted by your cologne.

The song is coming to its end,
But the night is still filled with chance.
You're kisses will still perservere,
Long after our slow dance...

...I love you Angel...




Copyright © jacobskk ... [ 2005-12-11 22:10:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Slow Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Cowardly_Lion on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:21:21 PM AEST
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I love all dance, and i love this poem:) romantic.


Re: Slow Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:46:51 AM AEST
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Very delightfull write.
huggs,
emy




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