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Array ( [sid] => 111232 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => climbing Back [time] => 2005-12-10 09:38:03 [hometext] => Climbing out of depression [bodytext] => When your sad and full of fear,
its hard to see through all your tears,
when your eyes have cried and cried,
its hard to just ajust your eyes.

You can see others pain,
but your mind and body cant refrain,
looking through windows of your soul,
struggling out of a big black hole,

You tell yourself you do not care,
but things are getting hard to bear,
just when your sanity is coming back,
your pushed back down,
where its dark and black.

Helping others is the answer ,
life is music your the dancer,
you have to fight and move on,
hope that nothing else goes wrong.

It easier said then it is done,
so tell yourself lifes just begun,
try to fight your despair,
you know theres people who really care.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 470 [topic] => 40 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

climbing Back

Contributed by lillyjane on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:38:03 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

When your sad and full of fear,
its hard to see through all your tears,
when your eyes have cried and cried,
its hard to just ajust your eyes.

You can see others pain,
but your mind and body cant refrain,
looking through windows of your soul,
struggling out of a big black hole,

You tell yourself you do not care,
but things are getting hard to bear,
just when your sanity is coming back,
your pushed back down,
where its dark and black.

Helping others is the answer ,
life is music your the dancer,
you have to fight and move on,
hope that nothing else goes wrong.

It easier said then it is done,
so tell yourself lifes just begun,
try to fight your despair,
you know theres people who really care..

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2005-12-10 09:38:03]
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Re: climbing Back (User Rating: 1 )
by His_Infernal_Majesty on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:40:51 AM AEST
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Nice write, enjoyed the read =)

Re: climbing Back (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 10:32:37 AM AEST
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good write

Re: climbing Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 02:34:17 PM AEST
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Helping others is the answer.
Life is music your the dancer.
I like these lines as it is true to put others first is the way to help yourself.
Not easy,but it can be done.
Your poem gives a lot of encuragement.

Sinned

Re: climbing Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:54:18 AM AEST
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A brilliant write, I love the lines 'Helping others is the answer, life is music and your the dancer' too. If you keep thinking like that you're on the road to recovery.
xxxx

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