Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	03-June 09:23:04 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 110706 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Clean Up On Aisle 9 [time] => 2005-12-01 15:37:19 [hometext] => I wrote this at lunch today. Mm, lol. [bodytext] => I've got good footwork.
My long fingers over your eyes.
I'm not just a store clerk,
My breath is full of flies.
I can lead you around,
A routinely night dance.
Just don't make a sound,
Your life is enhanced.

Pay no attention to the hand.
There's no need for intestines,
Not where I take you, my land
Welcome to my loving intentions.
The blue-coated men,
All lined up, audience to our dance.
Guns pointed for if we mess up. Then,
as we begin to prance,
Out falls your spine,
And strips of muscle
I'd call it all mine,
If you had not struggled.

I take you away from here,
No one will hurt you, dear.
A smile, and my store's sticker.
Hello, I'm Jason, how may I help you, sirs? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 13 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Clean Up On Aisle 9

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I've got good footwork.
My long fingers over your eyes.
I'm not just a store clerk,
My breath is full of flies.
I can lead you around,
A routinely night dance.
Just don't make a sound,
Your life is enhanced.

Pay no attention to the hand.
There's no need for intestines,
Not where I take you, my land
Welcome to my loving intentions.
The blue-coated men,
All lined up, audience to our dance.
Guns pointed for if we mess up. Then,
as we begin to prance,
Out falls your spine,
And strips of muscle
I'd call it all mine,
If you had not struggled.

I take you away from here,
No one will hurt you, dear.
A smile, and my store's sticker.
Hello, I'm Jason, how may I help you, sirs?

Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2005-12-01 15:37:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Clean Up On Aisle 9 (User Rating: 1 )
by Desolated_Denial on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:01:38 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow ...
[[ I usually write elaborate comments, but they wouldn't do justice. Just ... Wow ]]

Re: Clean Up On Aisle 9 (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 05:11:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow... kinda strange, but i liked it. and what exactly were you eating for lunch?? lol. this was a very powerful write and you wrote it well, good job!! but seriously, what were you eating?? lol. keep up the good work!

~sprints

Re: Clean Up On Aisle 9 (User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 10:13:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

WOW this was good.....

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com