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Array ( [sid] => 110651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why can't you see [time] => 2005-11-30 18:15:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => why can't you
open your eyes
and see what's
right in front of your face

why can't you see
that the love i have
for you could
never ever be replaced

don't you know
that i really loved you
and that real love
is rare

don't you know
that i would've done
anything for you
just to show you
how much i cared

do you feel a void
where my love
used to be

or are you still
having fun and
pretending you
don't need me
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 22 [informant] => cherylleighh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

why can't you see

Contributed by cherylleighh on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

why can't you
open your eyes
and see what's
right in front of your face

why can't you see
that the love i have
for you could
never ever be replaced

don't you know
that i really loved you
and that real love
is rare

don't you know
that i would've done
anything for you
just to show you
how much i cared

do you feel a void
where my love
used to be

or are you still
having fun and
pretending you
don't need me

Copyright © cherylleighh ... [ 2005-11-30 18:15:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: why can't you see (User Rating: 1 )
by CaseyRedman on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:18:46 PM AEST
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good poem nice rythm

Re: why can't you see (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:20:37 PM AEST
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You certainly put your torment down into words.
Hope that you find a love that loves you back

Steve

Re: why can't you see (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:21:14 PM AEST
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short, sweet and to the point...I like it. I'm sure you'll
find that special someone who respects you for who
you are...

Keep up the most excellent writing
Cheers!

Re: why can't you see (User Rating: 1 )
by forgottenone_iam on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem it reminds me of my ex that hurt me a lot.....but its a good write
Kim

Re: why can't you see (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessie53067 on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:07:59 PM AEST
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I like this. It rings true with what I'm going through right now and I was moved while reading it. Wonderful work.

-Jessie

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