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Array ( [sid] => 110067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eradication of a Disease [time] => 2005-11-20 13:15:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm a disappointment
The hugest let-down in the world.
I can't do anything right,
and I can't stop trying to,
because then I'd be even more of one.
I'm a disillusionment
My brain is smaller than a squirrel's.
When I attempt a smile,
It comes out as a frown,
And now I am even sadder, what fun.

Laugh at me, laugh your tongue out,
Spill your spit upon my cadaver.
Bend down to my ear and begin to shout,
Shout your hate, shout your anger,
shout your pain and shout your danger
that you will bring to me
and skin will beg to release
torrents of blood
for that legendary flood.

You know you don't have enough oxygen,
when your blood comes out blue.
None in my body and none in the world,
We're all just breathers of chlorine.
Suck it in hard, watch my human body squirm
in the last seconds, until i'm firm
rigid and never to worry you again.
Sweet sacrifice to make you feel safe for when
you close your beautiful eyes at night
and see once more, as I gasp in delight. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => AssassinatorGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Eradication of a Disease

Contributed by AssassinatorGirl on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 01:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm a disappointment
The hugest let-down in the world.
I can't do anything right,
and I can't stop trying to,
because then I'd be even more of one.
I'm a disillusionment
My brain is smaller than a squirrel's.
When I attempt a smile,
It comes out as a frown,
And now I am even sadder, what fun.

Laugh at me, laugh your tongue out,
Spill your spit upon my cadaver.
Bend down to my ear and begin to shout,
Shout your hate, shout your anger,
shout your pain and shout your danger
that you will bring to me
and skin will beg to release
torrents of blood
for that legendary flood.

You know you don't have enough oxygen,
when your blood comes out blue.
None in my body and none in the world,
We're all just breathers of chlorine.
Suck it in hard, watch my human body squirm
in the last seconds, until i'm firm
rigid and never to worry you again.
Sweet sacrifice to make you feel safe for when
you close your beautiful eyes at night
and see once more, as I gasp in delight.

Copyright © AssassinatorGirl ... [ 2005-11-20 13:15:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Eradication of a Disease (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:05:05 PM AEST
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hmmmm very angry... lol I like it though
good job, if this is you, u should not care about the things you do wrong, everybody does something wrong a couple of tymes..lol or more ain their lifetyme.. just relax be yourslef.
BEBE

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