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You see in me

All that is tired and hurts inside of me
You heal

You are an expectation that will never die
A dream a hope a cry a scream

Your eyes are a landscape
That only heaven can compare to

Your voice’s an opus for my soul
When ever I hear it I lose all control

My heart escapes my chest
It bursts and I am laid to rest

And only you can bring me back
You are the only reason

I would ever want to come back
The only thing that matters is you

Everything the no ones sees
You see in me

All that is tired and hurts inside of me
You heal

All my pain, my anguish
My broken heart and dreams

You are an expectation that will never die
A dream a hope a cry a scream

Your eyes are a landscape
That only heaven can compare to

I would rather be a ghost at your side
Then with the angels when I die

And you are not there to bring me back
Just like you are not here for me now

Thanks Tara for all your help in writing this [comments] => 2 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Landscape For The Broken Hearted Ghost

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 02:12:05 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Everything the no ones sees
You see in me

All that is tired and hurts inside of me
You heal

You are an expectation that will never die
A dream a hope a cry a scream

Your eyes are a landscape
That only heaven can compare to

Your voice’s an opus for my soul
When ever I hear it I lose all control

My heart escapes my chest
It bursts and I am laid to rest

And only you can bring me back
You are the only reason

I would ever want to come back
The only thing that matters is you

Everything the no ones sees
You see in me

All that is tired and hurts inside of me
You heal

All my pain, my anguish
My broken heart and dreams

You are an expectation that will never die
A dream a hope a cry a scream

Your eyes are a landscape
That only heaven can compare to

I would rather be a ghost at your side
Then with the angels when I die

And you are not there to bring me back
Just like you are not here for me now

Thanks Tara for all your help in writing this

Copyright Â© Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-11-19 02:12:05]
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Re: Landscape For The Broken Hearted Ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 02:08:15 AM AEST
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Aww, this flows along so sweetly, and almost dreamily,
only to plunge off the cliff of disappointment (if not despair),
right at the very end.

*hugs*
So sorry to hear about this.

Just have hope and keep looking;
the right one's bound to be out there somewhere. ^^

~*Kaitlyn

Re: Landscape For The Broken Hearted Ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 07:16:49 PM AEST
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John, beautifully written! the ending is so sad.

a marvel really. sorry i havent been around much. i do miss u dear friend and poet
xoox

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