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Cannot hide
The depths of poison
Built up in time
Ghost fish
Swim up stream
Against the current
Of eternity

The river mist
Colours crimson blood
Naive silver
Disguises sins,
A generation
Of wrong choices,
A society
Stained by
The death of millions…
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River Mist

Contributed by angryhippylibral on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:22:19 AM in AEST
Topic: political



The river mist
Cannot hide
The depths of poison
Built up in time
Ghost fish
Swim up stream
Against the current
Of eternity

The river mist
Colours crimson blood
Naive silver
Disguises sins,
A generation
Of wrong choices,
A society
Stained by
The death of millions…




Copyright © angryhippylibral ... [ 2005-11-16 09:22:19]
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Re: River Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:58:18 AM AEST
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I like the flow of this poem. mabey its just me but i dont know what its about? very good write.


Re: River Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by His_Infernal_Majesty on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:40:06 PM AEST
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I like the poem, i dont know what your actual meaning for the poem is. However i think its can be interpreted diffrent ways by diffrent people so there may not be simple one correct meaning.


Re: River Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:28:10 PM AEST
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Yes, you are ever so correct, this poem is an environmental write. We must all work to clean up the environment because the poisons from Industries dropped into the river, have an accumalated effect of destroying our future generation of life.

This is an excellent and a wonderful insightful poem, thank you for creating it and posting it. Raquel Leah




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