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Array ( [sid] => 109798 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet boredome [time] => 2005-11-15 17:37:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Boredome
Watching my own shadow
Counting my fingers
Heart feels shallow
My mind lingers
My body is so tired
And my eyes are low
Nothing to admire
Nowhere to go
Just me and myself
Alone in this room
I feel like I'm in bad health
And this bordome is my doom
The walls are pale and so dull
Same old faces
With nothing to show
Same old places
For hours in a row
Nothing on the Tv
So i stare into space
Someone please help me
Get out of this place

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Sweet boredome

Contributed by Poetic_Influence on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 05:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Boredome
Watching my own shadow
Counting my fingers
Heart feels shallow
My mind lingers
My body is so tired
And my eyes are low
Nothing to admire
Nowhere to go
Just me and myself
Alone in this room
I feel like I'm in bad health
And this bordome is my doom
The walls are pale and so dull
Same old faces
With nothing to show
Same old places
For hours in a row
Nothing on the Tv
So i stare into space
Someone please help me
Get out of this place

Copyright © Poetic_Influence ... [ 2005-11-15 17:37:51]
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Re: Sweet boredome (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:39:51 PM AEST
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You might want to consider spelling the word boredom correctly in your title.

Brandin

Re: Sweet boredome (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:01:05 PM AEST
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how bout u shut the ***** up

Re: Sweet boredome (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:08:20 PM AEST
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very lonely piece...but written so well. The rhyme was
good and meshed well as a whole.

my favourite line was:

Same old faces
With nothing to show
Same old places
For hours in a row...

Keep up the nice work

Re: Sweet boredome (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:35:22 PM AEST
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Ok..........PPL if you dont like a write.........give a subtle, comment and dont be rude, by typing the **** to shut up.! Dude, get a life. We all have feelings, and all need to write.! If you didnt like the write, then dont comment.!
Pfft..........some ppl.!
I thought it was well expressed........hey we all get down and out.........I know, Im the exact same way at the moment.! keep posting, it was a sad write, yet from your soul.

Brew~

Re: Sweet boredome (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:10:28 AM AEST
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I wrote shut the ***** up, im the writer, i wrote it to the person above

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