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Array ( [sid] => 109779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blade, meet my skin [time] => 2005-11-15 08:36:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => a small shard of glass
a broken razor blade
is what i use to cut
to try make my sadness fade
skin, meet my blade
blade, meet my skin
I've been trying so hard
to keep it in
but pain's the onlt thing
i can control
although now i am
no longer whole
the scars run deep
inside my heart
and on my skin
they've left their marks
so I'll never
be able to forget
now i live my life
full of regret
I'm so ashamed
of what i do
i make it so no one
has a single clue
i just lie to them
i say I'm doing great
lying to my friends
is the part i most hate
i hate myself for
the lies in live in
and so once again
blade, meet my skin

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blade, meet my skin

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:36:50 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

a small shard of glass
a broken razor blade
is what i use to cut
to try make my sadness fade
skin, meet my blade
blade, meet my skin
I've been trying so hard
to keep it in
but pain's the onlt thing
i can control
although now i am
no longer whole
the scars run deep
inside my heart
and on my skin
they've left their marks
so I'll never
be able to forget
now i live my life
full of regret
I'm so ashamed
of what i do
i make it so no one
has a single clue
i just lie to them
i say I'm doing great
lying to my friends
is the part i most hate
i hate myself for
the lies in live in
and so once again
blade, meet my skin

Copyright Â© xXxmegsxXx ... [ 2005-11-15 08:36:50]
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Re: blade, meet my skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermilion on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:47:48 AM AEST
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Clichéd, and some spelling mistakes, but apart from that, not bad at all.

Blessed be.
Mili. xx

Re: blade, meet my skin (User Rating: 1 )
by hearts4pain on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 04:56:08 PM AEST
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i love love love this poem
i know EXACTLY how you feel
alot of people write this stuff and write it in different ways trying not to use the obvious information.
but you say it all truthfully and bluntly. and i love this poem!

great work

much love,
i hope you can learn how to take control of stopping yourself from cuttting. you would have control over that. think about it.

Re: blade, meet my skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:51:54 AM AEST
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This piece flowed well, and, naturally, I liked that :)

Agreed, though, it's pretty cliched - try and find a fresh way of looking at things.

Regardless, I loved the abrupt-ish style this was written in.

If you ever need to talk, I'm here.
Keep writing!

~KayT

Re: blade, meet my skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:06:12 AM AEST
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This piece flowed well, and, naturally, I liked that :)

Agreed, though, it's pretty cliched - try and find a fresh way of looking at things.

Regardless, I loved the abrupt-ish style this was written in.

If you ever need to talk, I'm here.
Keep writing!

~KayT

Re: blade, meet my skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 03:46:47 PM AEST
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I really like it. Its so true. I can relate.
Keep up the good writing but I hope things get better for you.
-Drapes

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