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Blooms in the morning
Cutting the dense thick fog
That rises impotent
To its heat

The sun shines
Overflowing energy
That crosses the forest
Waking up in a frozen sleep
Of the humid night

A music note flies lonely
Coming from a sleepy wake up
Deeply echoing
Bringing infinite answers

A hoarse roar
Shakes in a heavy body
Of a daring fatigue
In the shown laziness
Of the life that is not in a hurry

By Fernanda F. Rocha©
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Dawn

Contributed by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 06:54:54 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The naked light
Blooms in the morning
Cutting the dense thick fog
That rises impotent
To its heat

The sun shines
Overflowing energy
That crosses the forest
Waking up in a frozen sleep
Of the humid night

A music note flies lonely
Coming from a sleepy wake up
Deeply echoing
Bringing infinite answers

A hoarse roar
Shakes in a heavy body
Of a daring fatigue
In the shown laziness
Of the life that is not in a hurry

By Fernanda F. Rocha©

Copyright Â© Fernanda_F_Rocha ... [ 2005-11-10 06:54:54]
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Re: Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:41:12 AM AEST
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"Cutting the dense thick fog
That rises impotent
To its heat"

"The sun shines
Overflowing energy"

"Bringing infinite answers"

"Of the life that is not in a hurry"

...these are the lines I kept going back to...for most of this week my heart, spirit and soul have felt an awful lot like that dense thick fog...and I'd love a good soaking in that overflowng energy...I need some answers and the accelerator pedal of life is stuck on the floor...retirement?

...it was a pleasant read...

...someone commented about one of your spellings...said it was distracting...don't listen...authenticity should never succomb to the impertinent whims of propriety...

...have a good day...

ron...enigma

Re: Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:13:51 AM AEST
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Very nice, I enjoyed this one as well. I too get critized for some grammer or spelling. I feel poetry is within ones soul of your heart. Sometimes grammer and spelling are not a part of poety, but poetry is what you are from within. Truely a deep provocative write here.

AMber Rose Yeager

Re: Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 10:19:24 AM AEST
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Thank You very much Ron .... always a gentleman :)

Thank You Amber Rose too :) I dont recall being criticized for some grammar or spelling...not because I'm an expert in English...even because its not my native language...but because I ask an English friend to review it after written :)

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