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Array ( [sid] => 109410 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I wonder [time] => 2005-11-09 19:38:36 [hometext] => I was bored?! No I was just not able to go on the computer so I thought I write something, I know it's corney [bodytext] => I Wonder

I wonder what it would be like
To be the one you love
To be the one you care for
The one you kiss and hug

I wonder what it would be like
To be popular for a day
To talk the talk
And walk the walk
And know people listen to what I say

I wonder what it would be like
If I was gone tomorrow
Would anyone be sad
Would they feel sickness and sorrow

I wonder what it would be like
To hear all the crap you talk
To see how much you hated me
To know the path you walk

I wonder what it would be like
To not be hurt for once
To be able to love without any fear
And not the think that guy is a dunce

I wonder what it would be like
To live a life without fear
To see a world without the lies
To not have to shed a tear

I wonder what it would be like
If this world was peaceful
If this world was perfect
If this world was beautiful

I wonder what it would be like
No, I know what it would be like
Because this world is terrorized
By you and me alike

By: René R. Gemme
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I wonder

Contributed by PoisonousPyscho on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:38:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I Wonder

I wonder what it would be like
To be the one you love
To be the one you care for
The one you kiss and hug

I wonder what it would be like
To be popular for a day
To talk the talk
And walk the walk
And know people listen to what I say

I wonder what it would be like
If I was gone tomorrow
Would anyone be sad
Would they feel sickness and sorrow

I wonder what it would be like
To hear all the crap you talk
To see how much you hated me
To know the path you walk

I wonder what it would be like
To not be hurt for once
To be able to love without any fear
And not the think that guy is a dunce

I wonder what it would be like
To live a life without fear
To see a world without the lies
To not have to shed a tear

I wonder what it would be like
If this world was peaceful
If this world was perfect
If this world was beautiful

I wonder what it would be like
No, I know what it would be like
Because this world is terrorized
By you and me alike

By: René R. Gemme

Copyright Â© PoisonousPyscho ... [ 2005-11-09 19:38:36]
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Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:40:59 PM AEST
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i enjoyed it.

~i am drunk in the garbage
that you left
a knife to my throat
begging for death~weepingprophet(of revenge)

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:49:47 PM AEST
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*smiles* interesting. It's amazing what brilliant writes come out of free time isn't it?

Lovely poem :)

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:16:37 PM AEST
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---"of revenge" was deleted by the moderators and can now be veiwed only in my journal---

~weepingprophet

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