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Array ( [sid] => 10941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Mourn [time] => 2003-01-22 11:20:00 [hometext] => It's self-explanatory. Miscarriage, sorrow, suicide. I didn't file it under suicide because (1) it was someone else's suicide, and (2) i didn't feel like it.
The symbolism of the death on the fifty-first morning refers to the meaning of the number itself, failure and pain. [bodytext] => dressed in winter sunset
she beckoned from the Blue
my fatal Fuccubus

an eternity spent in tri-petaled foreplay
no climax in sight
she stood as the Last Ride
in my abusement park

a mushroom cloud of passion
my mushroomhead devoured
by her cryptorchid, blooming in death's valley

my glowspyrm grew cold and furious
in her nine month tomb with a view
til it tore itself free
(with a splatter of gore dappled fluid)
destroying itself in it's haste

for fifty nights, she wept a drowning pool
dead, in a galaxy of pain
til i found her on the fifty-first mourning
cold, silent, and lifeless
her wrists chewed through
by the beast of unsurmountable sorrow

bespeckled with every hue of hell
a rainbow of agony in the undreaming night
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Mourn

Contributed by Cancer on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



dressed in winter sunset
she beckoned from the Blue
my fatal Fuccubus

an eternity spent in tri-petaled foreplay
no climax in sight
she stood as the Last Ride
in my abusement park

a mushroom cloud of passion
my mushroomhead devoured
by her cryptorchid, blooming in death's valley

my glowspyrm grew cold and furious
in her nine month tomb with a view
til it tore itself free
(with a splatter of gore dappled fluid)
destroying itself in it's haste

for fifty nights, she wept a drowning pool
dead, in a galaxy of pain
til i found her on the fifty-first mourning
cold, silent, and lifeless
her wrists chewed through
by the beast of unsurmountable sorrow

bespeckled with every hue of hell
a rainbow of agony in the undreaming night




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-01-22 11:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Mourn (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:17:28 PM AEST
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Wow this was great! Very deep,sad poetry!
Keep em coming! Christina


Re: Mourn (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 05:00:13 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful...


Re: Mourn (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:30:07 AM AEST
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This was very vivid and somewhat disturbing, but I enjoyed it. Keep these up.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Mourn (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 10:36:36 PM AEST
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HI.........sandy




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