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~~~~~
When I’m blue
I come to you
You help me soar
Right off the floor

You hold the string as I fly
To ensure I don’t get too high
Yet when I tumble to the ground
You’re the first one around

To pick me up by my wings
To repair all broken things
You release the beauty that I hide
By showing off my insides

You gently reel me in
When the air becomes too thin
My protector you seem to be
Always looking out for me

Though I have little to offer back
Your friendship never seems to lack
So I soar through the sky
Because you’ve given me air to fly

Thank you!
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You Helped Me Soar

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:01:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

You Helped Me Soar
~~~~~
When I’m blue
I come to you
You help me soar
Right off the floor

You hold the string as I fly
To ensure I don’t get too high
Yet when I tumble to the ground
You’re the first one around

To pick me up by my wings
To repair all broken things
You release the beauty that I hide
By showing off my insides

You gently reel me in
When the air becomes too thin
My protector you seem to be
Always looking out for me

Though I have little to offer back
Your friendship never seems to lack
So I soar through the sky
Because you’ve given me air to fly

Thank you!

Copyright Â© Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2005-11-07 08:01:04]
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Re: You Helped Me Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:04:03 AM AEST
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A very nice tribute, seems like a good friend you have. I think everyone needs that person, the one, that picks us up and dusts us off. Geat write, I enjoyed reading it.

-Cassy

Re: You Helped Me Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:06:15 AM AEST
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everyone need some one and oneday you can help that person.

Re: You Helped Me Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by she_smiles on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:54:45 AM AEST
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Your poem is so touching! What a blessing to have such a caring and close relationship as that. Poem well done, not to mention good rhythm, flow, and rhyme. Take care :)

Re: You Helped Me Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:52:19 AM AEST
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Vivid and real imagery , very well done. Beautiful work.

Laurie

Re: You Helped Me Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 03:48:21 PM AEST
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love your poem, JSM. I am becoming quite a fan of yours.

Ginny

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