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I just don’t know how I can win

Look who I am fighting against
God knows that I am not the best

How can I beat her to your heart?
I know I can’t win; I’m falling apart

I do not know if I can win
But I’m not going to give in

I’m going to fight for you
I want my dreams to be true

I am going to give it my all
I hope you’ll be there if I fall

All I want is to be with you
And for the sky to be blue

I like you way too much
I hope I have the right touch

All I want is for you to fall for me
And to see who I really can be

I am going to keep up the fight
I am going to fight with all my might

I do not know if I can win
But I’m not going to give in
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Going to Keep Fighting

Contributed by sprinter27 on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 03:58:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I want to give up and give in
I just don’t know how I can win

Look who I am fighting against
God knows that I am not the best

How can I beat her to your heart?
I know I can’t win; I’m falling apart

I do not know if I can win
But I’m not going to give in

I’m going to fight for you
I want my dreams to be true

I am going to give it my all
I hope you’ll be there if I fall

All I want is to be with you
And for the sky to be blue

I like you way too much
I hope I have the right touch

All I want is for you to fall for me
And to see who I really can be

I am going to keep up the fight
I am going to fight with all my might

I do not know if I can win
But I’m not going to give in

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-11-05 15:58:41]
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Re: Going to Keep Fighting (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 05:56:20 PM AEST
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You go girl!! Lovely write..
Jenni

Re: Going to Keep Fighting (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 07:31:18 AM AEST
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A very good display of self struggle to have
and find the true love that you seek. If you
care for him this much and your not with
him yet then I can’t event imagine the love
you will have together. Go for him if you
truly care but if he doesn’t feel the same then
hold back and you will find your love. Very
good write and I feel the emotions and hope
all goes well in finding this love. Thank you
for the comments on my writes they are much
enjoyed and truly heart felt. You are at what I
call my favorite part of meeting someone. I
love the dating part and that nervous feeling
you get around someone you care about. That
feel were you want to do everything for them
so they will be yours and give themselves to
you. Take care and enjoy that all life has to
give you….Steve

Re: Going to Keep Fighting (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 03:38:47 PM AEST
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Well! I guess this answers my question in pm...lol! Nothing wrong with seeing a love poem posted from you Sprints...I like it.
Especially those last four stanzas. Keep fighting indeed, and all the best : )

Scorp.

Re: Going to Keep Fighting (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:49:14 PM AEST
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I liked this very much. And dont worry...i'lll catch you if you fall. what r friends for?
-Jessica

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