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Array ( [sid] => 108823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Addiction [time] => 2005-10-31 17:55:45 [hometext] => I wrote this a few months ago . Hope you like it. Please review. [bodytext] => I know a girl
Who has an addiction
And everytime anyone goes
Around her
They plug their nose
Because she smells of drugs
It smells so retched
And I know a girl
Who has an addiction
It's not drugs
But I wish it was
Cause her addiction is a boy
Who she thinks she loves
But if only she knew
What I know
How much he cheats on her
All the time
And he makes fun of her so much
With his friends when she's not around
And I know a girl who has an addiction
And I know her because that girl is me
With all the thoughts running through my head
I write and I write
But they won't go away
And I know that they're bad
And I want it to stop
But it won't
Or it wouldn't
Unless I could find
Someone who cares about
A girl with an addiction
I know a girl
Who has an addiction
To hurting herself
Cutting herself
Crying out for help
Trying so hard to be noticed
And at the same time to be invisible
To let everyone finally know how she feels
To let them see that she does feel
What they do to her, say to her
Making her hate
Life itself
I know a girl who had an addiction
But she doesn't anymore
She took her own life because she was tired of it.
I know some girls who have some addictions
I know because I'm one of them.






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Addiction

Contributed by flamingblade on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 05:55:45 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



I know a girl
Who has an addiction
And everytime anyone goes
Around her
They plug their nose
Because she smells of drugs
It smells so retched
And I know a girl
Who has an addiction
It's not drugs
But I wish it was
Cause her addiction is a boy
Who she thinks she loves
But if only she knew
What I know
How much he cheats on her
All the time
And he makes fun of her so much
With his friends when she's not around
And I know a girl who has an addiction
And I know her because that girl is me
With all the thoughts running through my head
I write and I write
But they won't go away
And I know that they're bad
And I want it to stop
But it won't
Or it wouldn't
Unless I could find
Someone who cares about
A girl with an addiction
I know a girl
Who has an addiction
To hurting herself
Cutting herself
Crying out for help
Trying so hard to be noticed
And at the same time to be invisible
To let everyone finally know how she feels
To let them see that she does feel
What they do to her, say to her
Making her hate
Life itself
I know a girl who had an addiction
But she doesn't anymore
She took her own life because she was tired of it.
I know some girls who have some addictions
I know because I'm one of them.










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Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 07:01:05 PM AEST
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this write shows that you do get in touch with your heart and soul. Continue to write and let your feelings out. Honesty with yourself and others is the first step to reaching the life that you want. Self love is the second. I feel an inner spark in you and I know that you can accomplish anything you set your mind to doing. Good luck to you!! Keep penning your thoughts. Spend time with nature, thats where true inner peace comes from.

Much love
Michelle


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 04:41:53 PM AEST
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Wow, that's really something. Great write. And good luck to you...

-Drapes-




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