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Array ( [sid] => 108321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sovereignty [time] => 2005-10-23 19:48:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The serrated edge cuts deep into my skin
Warm blood oozing
From a severed vein
Hopes, dreams and love lost
All run from my wrist
A payment of the final cost
The entwinng of blood and sorrow

Battered and bruised by your deception
There is no choice
This is my redemption
The end of naivety

Feeling heady
Trying to get up on my feet
Arms numb
Grip becomes unsteady
Sweet victory or bitter defeat?

Fall to the floor
Butterfly with wings broken
Death at my doorstep
So many thoughts still unspoken
Time grudglingly stops

Darkness surrounds me
Pain ceases
I am free finally
Hurting no more [comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 13 [informant] => coral [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Sovereignty

Contributed by coral on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:48:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The serrated edge cuts deep into my skin
Warm blood oozing
From a severed vein
Hopes, dreams and love lost
All run from my wrist
A payment of the final cost
The entwinng of blood and sorrow

Battered and bruised by your deception
There is no choice
This is my redemption
The end of naivety

Feeling heady
Trying to get up on my feet
Arms numb
Grip becomes unsteady
Sweet victory or bitter defeat?

Fall to the floor
Butterfly with wings broken
Death at my doorstep
So many thoughts still unspoken
Time grudglingly stops

Darkness surrounds me
Pain ceases
I am free finally
Hurting no more

Copyright © coral ... [ 2005-10-23 19:48:35]
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Re: Sovereignty (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:12:06 AM AEST
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Hey,
I think i've commented on ur poetry before.
I really like the idea of hurting no more
If i wasnt so curious about what life holds i really probably would try
I like this poem
its really got emotion
I dunno im just blabbing on
good write
till next time
emz

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