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Array ( [sid] => 108184 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All those days I spent with you [time] => 2005-10-21 11:21:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => All those days I spent with you
cant belive the things you do
It all seemed like yesterday would never end....
but thats how it all began

I'd hoped the summer would last
I'd hoped that this would never pass
all those days i spent with you
hope you feel the same way too

My life is everchanging
my world is rearanging
In these shadows I will fall
because if never made it at all
I've never seen the light of day
in my life my shadows will play
upon my death bed l laugh
because of all the aftermath

Im falling for you
I've become confused
I pronounced my love while being the used
I wonderd how your feelings faded into this darker shade
you've cut me down deep in my shadows
frozen in time memories of mine
will bleed out from me so that you may see
that these words are my last

I'd hoped the summer would last
I'd hoped that this would never pass
all those days i spent with you
hope you feel the same way too

In my heart my shadows lie
in wait for me to die
tonight my heart will bleed
out these memories
and I will drown with my sorrow
so that my shadows will comfort me
with my own misery
yea my misery....my misery....my ****** misery

All those days I spent with you
cant belive the things you do
it all seemed like yesterday would never end....
and thats how it all began

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 24 [informant] => dcr515 [notes] => Mod 9 10/22/05 Bleep word Please bleep the whole word. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

All those days I spent with you

Contributed by dcr515 on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:21:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

All those days I spent with you
cant belive the things you do
It all seemed like yesterday would never end....
but thats how it all began

I'd hoped the summer would last
I'd hoped that this would never pass
all those days i spent with you
hope you feel the same way too

My life is everchanging
my world is rearanging
In these shadows I will fall
because if never made it at all
I've never seen the light of day
in my life my shadows will play
upon my death bed l laugh
because of all the aftermath

Im falling for you
I've become confused
I pronounced my love while being the used
I wonderd how your feelings faded into this darker shade
you've cut me down deep in my shadows
frozen in time memories of mine
will bleed out from me so that you may see
that these words are my last

I'd hoped the summer would last
I'd hoped that this would never pass
all those days i spent with you
hope you feel the same way too

In my heart my shadows lie
in wait for me to die
tonight my heart will bleed
out these memories
and I will drown with my sorrow
so that my shadows will comfort me
with my own misery
yea my misery....my misery....my ****** misery

All those days I spent with you
cant belive the things you do
it all seemed like yesterday would never end....
and thats how it all began

Copyright © dcr515 ... [ 2005-10-21 11:21:41]
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Re: All those days I spent with you (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 06:03:16 PM AEST
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a poem with much feelings put in it wow such a good write i know how this feels cause i broke up with my bf and wowo thats how i feel never being able to regain what i lost the time we had and all that sad depressing junk nice poem

Re: All those days I spent with you (User Rating: 1 )
by craigcully on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:52:53 PM AEST
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Kinda funny how one line, "all those days I spent with you", conjurs up so many memories... you know? For me it just snaps me back to another place and another time.

Good stuff.

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