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Array ( [sid] => 108107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Took the Best, Take the worst instead [time] => 2005-10-20 02:48:35 [hometext] => God killed him, he let him die...i will never forgive him...he should let the bad people like me die, not people like rob [bodytext] => How could you do this?
How could you let him go?
How could you let him tie the rope?
How could you lose such a soul?

You took the best, you bastard
Now its time to take the worst
Time to let me tie the rope
This life won't be your first

Take my life for his
You have stopped me too many times
It's time to save us all
Protect the world from my crimes

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You Took the Best, Take the worst instead

Contributed by guiltycircles on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:48:35 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

How could you do this?
How could you let him go?
How could you let him tie the rope?
How could you lose such a soul?

You took the best, you bastard
Now its time to take the worst
Time to let me tie the rope
This life won't be your first

Take my life for his
You have stopped me too many times
It's time to save us all
Protect the world from my crimes

Copyright © guiltycircles ... [ 2005-10-20 02:48:35]
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Re: You Took the Best, Take the worst instead (User Rating: 1 )
by Blessedangel on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 08:31:50 AM AEST
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Thats a great write, i myself was in that position, where my brothers life was taken when i knew it should have been me
keep up the good work
Yours ..... BA

Re: You Took the Best, Take the worst instead (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:04:25 AM AEST
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thats beautiful sophie
R.I.P. Rob
love you XoXo

Re: You Took the Best, Take the worst instead (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:41:52 PM AEST
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Very emotive, saying so much in so few words. I enjoyed this read, and can understand where your anger is coming from. Love that ending, it's strong, and it leaves an impact.

Scorp.

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